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It's beautiful day, it blossomed all flower in my campus. I'm going to write about my country's season. In korea we have four seasons. Spring blows yellow sand storms from China so, we should be careful an organic disease. But we have diverse festivals in spring so, I'm going to go butterfly festival soon. Summer is hot and comes rainy season. I don't like the summer because it is the time to expose our body. Fall in Korea is very beautiful because tree turn into yellow and red so, we can see colarful and beautiful landscape. At last, winter is too cold. but I don't feel cold well because I live in south area. I love spring. because it is the time of start to everything and it is very warm and I can see a beautiful scenery. See you next monday. Enjoy your holiday :)

Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today. I enjoyed reading it. I wish to experience the four seasons someday. Take care and enjoy your holiday tomorrow. T. Kelly It's beautiful day, it blossomed all flower in my campus. >> It's a beautiful day, flowers bloom all over the campus.I'm going to write about my country's season. >> I'm going to write about my country's seasons.In Korea we have four seasons. >> Correct.Spring blows yellow sand storms from China so, we should be careful an organic disease. >> In spring, we experience yellow sandstorm from China, so we should be careful from respiratory disease.But we have diverse festivals in spring so, I'm going to go butterfly festival soon. >> We have various festivals in spring, so I'm going to go to the Butterfly Festival soon.Summer is hot and comes rainy season. >> Summer is hot, and sometimes it's a rainy season.I don't like the summer because it is the time to expose our body. >> I don't like summer because it is the time of exposing our body.Fall in Korea is very beautiful because tree turn into yellow and red so, we can see colarful and beautiful landscape. >> Fall in Korea is very beautiful because the tres turn into yellow and red, so we can see a colorful and beautiful landscape.At last, winter is too cold. >> Correct. but I don't feel cold well because I live in south area. >> I don't feel too cold because I live in the southern area.I love spring. because it is the time of start to everything and it is very warm and I can see a beautiful scenery. >> I love spring because it is the time to start everything. It is warm, and I can see a beautiful scenery.See you next monday. >> See you on Monday.Enjoy your holiday :) >> Correct.