Hello dear~

2011-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Hello. I am going to Pagsanjan Falls and Taytay . I am so excited!!!! one of exciting is I will buy imitation perfume. Days pass by too fast. It's already thursday ;) Ihope you have a great great day !! xoxoxo

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Aloha [이름]! I agree, days pass by really fast and two days from now, we\'ll have a brand new year. :) According to what you have written, you will be going to Laguna, Philippines. It is where Pagsanjan Falls and Taytay Falls are located. These are some of the top tourist attractions here in our country. And when you get there, don\'t forget to have a taste of their famous \"Buko Pie\" and \"Pansit Bihon\". They are really delicious! You know what, Laguna is just near my hometown, Batangas. It\'s only 1-2 hours away. ^^, Just like you, I\'m also excited for my vacation this coming Lunar New Year. Cheers! >^.^< Anyway, I made some modofications in your letter. Hello. >> Correct! :) Nice!I am going to Pagsanjan Falls and Taytay .>> Correct! :) Very Good! I am so excited!!!! >> Correct! :) Great! one of exciting is I will buy imitation perfume.>> One of those things I am excited about is buying an imitation perfume. (Sentence Construction, Capitalization)Days pass by too fast. It\'s already thursday ;)>> Days pass by too fast. It\'s already Thursday. ;) (Capitalization)Ihope you have a great great day !!>> I hope you have a great day! (Spacing) See you tomorrow dear! Have a great day too! Take care! ~ Teacher Lorraine ^^,

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