Hello dear :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly.
Are you Kelly? I got confused because you wrote here you are Venus a few days ago.
Do you know Venus? she is my before teacher.
She taught me briskly and kindly like you.
I'm going to write about a book.
I enjoy reading a book on my break time.
I borrowed books about Environment-Enterprise and self-improvement yesterday.
Actually I'm not interested in Environment.
But I want to know diverse knowledge in many field.
This is one of the reason why I borrowed this book.
Another reason is because many countries are interested in Environment.
By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, as I was very busy.
I'm planning to read this book for this week.
Anyway, we should talk about my favorite book tomorrow.
See you then dear :D
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
This is [Name] Kelly. I’m excited for our topic about your favorite book. Reading is a very good past time. It enhances our vocabulary and our knowledge about various things.
Are you Kelly? I got confused because you wrote here you are Venus a few days ago.
>> Are you Kelly? I was confused because you wrote here a few days ago that you are Venus.Do you know Venus? she is my before teacher.
>> Do you know Venus? She was my former teacher.
>> Do you know Venus? She was my teacher before.She taught me briskly and kindly like you.
>> She taught me briskly and kindly just like you.I'm going to write about a book.
>> I’m going to write an essay about a book.I enjoy reading a book on my break time.
>> I enjoy reading a book during my break time.I borrowed books about Environment-Enterprise and self-improvement yesterday.
>> Correct.Actually I'm not interested in Environment.
>> Actually I'm not interested in the Environment.
But I want to know diverse knowledge in many field.
>> But I want to know diverse knowledge in many fields.
This is one of the reason why I borrowed this book.
>> This is one of the reasons why I borrowed this book.
Another reason is because many countries are interested in Environment.
>> Correct.By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, as I was very busy.
>> Correct.
>> By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, because I was very busy.I'm planning to read this book for this week.
>> I’m planning to read the book this week.Anyway, we should talk about my favorite book tomorrow.
>> Correct.See you then dear :D
>> Correct.
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