Hello dear :D

2011-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Kelly. Are you Kelly? I got confused because you wrote here you are Venus a few days ago. Do you know Venus? she is my before teacher. She taught me briskly and kindly like you. I'm going to write about a book. I enjoy reading a book on my break time. I borrowed books about Environment-Enterprise and self-improvement yesterday. Actually I'm not interested in Environment. But I want to know diverse knowledge in many field. This is one of the reason why I borrowed this book. Another reason is because many countries are interested in Environment. By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, as I was very busy. I'm planning to read this book for this week. Anyway, we should talk about my favorite book tomorrow. See you then dear :D

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]! This is [Name] Kelly. I’m excited for our topic about your favorite book. Reading is a very good past time. It enhances our vocabulary and our knowledge about various things. Are you Kelly? I got confused because you wrote here you are Venus a few days ago. >> Are you Kelly? I was confused because you wrote here a few days ago that you are Venus.Do you know Venus? she is my before teacher. >> Do you know Venus? She was my former teacher. >> Do you know Venus? She was my teacher before.She taught me briskly and kindly like you. >> She taught me briskly and kindly just like you.I'm going to write about a book. >> I’m going to write an essay about a book.I enjoy reading a book on my break time. >> I enjoy reading a book during my break time.I borrowed books about Environment-Enterprise and self-improvement yesterday. >> Correct.Actually I'm not interested in Environment. >> Actually I'm not interested in the Environment. But I want to know diverse knowledge in many field. >> But I want to know diverse knowledge in many fields. This is one of the reason why I borrowed this book. >> This is one of the reasons why I borrowed this book. Another reason is because many countries are interested in Environment. >> Correct.By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, as I was very busy. >> Correct. >> By the way, I didn't read that book because I didn't have time, because I was very busy.I'm planning to read this book for this week. >> I’m planning to read the book this week.Anyway, we should talk about my favorite book tomorrow. >> Correct.See you then dear :D >> Correct.

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