Hello Debby :)

2014-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello again Debby! Wow... I was a little embarassed because your speaking speed is much more faster than former teacher. But I love it. Although it's a little hard to understand, it will help me to improve my listening skill. I'm not good at using English yet. So if our conversation isn't smooth, please understand me. XD See you tomorrow~ <Homework> I have a habit to bite my nails. I don't bite much than when I was young. But it isn't still fixed completely. The nail is often very useful, so I try not to bite my nails to preserve them everyday. p.s: I have a one thing to ask to you. If there's any error in my writing, please tell me the reason it's not right. I want to know why I should fix it like this.

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Hi [이름]^^   I\'m very happy to meet you.^^ Thank you for this and yes I\'m sorry I tend to speak fast. Our time is only 10 minutes so I want to tackle a lot of topics with you. Don\'t worry, I\'ll make sure to speak slowly next time. Thank you for answering your homework and I do agree that you must take care of your nails.^^ Your request is good and I will do my best but I think you made really good sentences and you had most of them correct. I just add another sentence that would have a diffirent pattern but it has the same idea.   Till the next class. Take care^^   T.Debby   Here are my corrections:   Hello again Debby!Wow... I was a little embarassed because your speaking speed is much more faster than former teacher. >> CORRECT OR> I feel a little shy because you speak fast as compared to my previuos teacher. But I love it. Although it\'s a little hard to understand, it will help me to improve my listening skill. >> CORRECT OR> I am okay with it since it would make me practice on listening.I\'m not good at using English yet. So if our conversation isn\'t smooth, please understand me. XDSee you tomorrow~ >> CORRECT OR> I am not the best but then I hope you consider if our coversation isn\'t that smooth. See you on the next class.<Homework>I have a habit to bite my nails. >> I have a habit of biting my nails. [to is for future tense and since it\'s a habit you are still doing it so it\'s better to use \"biting\"-present progressive tense] I don\'t bite much than when I was young. >> CORRECT OR> I didn\'t do it often when I was younger. But it isn\'t still fixed completely. >> CORRECT OR> I still cannot put a stop to it. The nail is often very useful, so I try not to bite my nails to preserve them everyday. >> CORRECT OR> I try to lessen that habit so I won\'t ruin them.p.s: I have a one thing to ask to you. >> CORRECT Or> I need a favor. If there\'s any error in my writing, please tell me the reason it\'s not right. >> CORRECT OR> If i made an error please let me know the reason. I want to know why I should fix it like this. >> CORRECT OR> I prefer to correct it myself.

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