Hello Dianne!

Hello, Seung Ho!

Teacher Dianne is now back, she is feeling a lot better. ~

I will let her know that you want to talk about business on your next class. ^^

I had fun reading your composition. I had fun listening to your ideas yesterday, too.

Thank you so much for sending this to me. I am hoping to talk to you again soon. See you!

~Teacher Elisha

What kind of developments might happen in health care in the future? Explain your answer in not more than 3 sentences.
=> In the future, there will be many robots that help doctors performs sergery. The robots will not make mistakes and more precise than people.
 >> In the future, there will be many robots which can help doctors perform surgery. The robots will not make mistakes and they will be more precise than people.

We will extend the life of humanbeing longer than 100years.

>> We may be able to extend humans\' lifespan for more than 100 years.
 When I was 26 years old and senior in university, I met her in 1995 in my university and she was a freshman and 19 years old.

>> In 1995, when I was 26 years old and a senior in college, I met her in my university. She was 19 years old and a freshman. 

 her major was social welfare.

>> CORRECT!

OR: Her major was Social Welfare.

she was a student in night school and (She was) working to make tuition of university in the student affairs section in a daytime.
>> She was a student at night school and she was working to make money for her tuition in the university\'s student affairs section in daytime.
At that time, I was a president of the student body of my university.

>> At that time, I was the president of the student body in my university.

So I had many chances to visit to the student affair section for the school affairs.

>> I had a lot of chances to visit the student affairs section because of school affairs.
 One day I saw a beautiful girl in there and I couldn\'t see her directly Because The beauty of her was quite breathtaking.

>> One day, I saw a beautiful girl in there and I could not look at her directly because her beauty was quite breathtaking.

From that day on, I agonized for several days(a few days, some days) how I should (how could I ) make her my girlfriend. I found out a good idea to make her my girlfriend.
>> From that day on, I agonized for several days on how I could make her my girlfriend. I had a good idea onto how I could make her my girlfriend.
I called her \"hello, I am a president of student body. I want to meet you to survey about the life of freshman in our university. Can you help me\" She said \"no problem, I will.\"

>> I called her and said, \" Hello, I am the president of the student body. I want to meet you because I am conducting a survey about the life of freshmen in our university. Can you help me?\", she said, \" No problem. I will.\".
 So, we met and I take her far away from our university by my car.

>> So, we met and I took her far away from our university using my car.

She asked me \"why do you take me away far from the school.\"

>> She asked me, \" Why are you taking me far away from the school?\".

I answered\" many of students knows(know who I am, I am a student body) me who is a president of student body, if they see us, they could(might) think that I make a date with you.

>> I answered, \"Many students know that I am the president of the student body, if they see us, they might think that I am dating you.\".

OR: I answered, \"Many students know who I am, I am the president of the student body. If they see us, they might think that I am dating you.\".

She agreed with me.

>> CORRECT!

So, we went to the nice cafe and talked about many things

>> CORRECT! 

OR: So, we went to the nice cafe and talked about many things.
 This is the beginning of my love story.

>> CORRECT!

OR: This is the beginning of our love story.
 6 years after we met, we got married and 19 years passed away(passed by).

>> 6 years after we met, we got married and then 19 years passed by.

OR: We got married after 6 years and 19 years has passed by since then.

she is beautiful and vivid until now, Sometimes I used to ask her, if you will be born again ( in your) next life, you will marry me again.

>> Her beauty is still vivid until now. Sometimes, I would ask her, \"If you will be born again on your next life, will you marry me again?\"

She answer everytime \" I will never be deceived you\" But I know that she will be deceived again.
>> Every time, she answers, \" I will never be deceived by you.\", but,  I know that she will be deceived again.
Not only her beauty, I love my wife\'s personality.

>> I don\'t only love her beauty, but I also love my wife\'s personality.

She has look that is smiled and vivid.

>> She has a vivid smile.

And she is very kind to others.

>> CORRECT!

she would like to go to famous restaurant and enjoy travel.

>>She would like to go to a famous restaurant and to enjoy travelling.

She is a faithful christian. 

>> CORRECT!

OR: She is a faithful Christian.

 She works in the field of social welfare for government.

>> She works in the field of social welfare for the government.

These days she is getting big stress because she has heavy workload.

>> These days, she is getting a lot of stress because of her heavy workload.

She has been working until 10 o\'clock almost everyday for more 1 month.

>> She has been working until 10 o\'clock almost everyday for more  than 1 month.