hello, Dona! I'm Kim.

2010-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I made sentences for question 3,4 on page 31,32. First,I wrote the question number 3. I am interested in English because I really want to speak well in English so I would like to study English first. I have studied English for a long time but i can't speak English in public any simple daily routine conversation. I like sope opera such as 'friends','CSI'. I envy the people who don't need to subtitle when they are watching movie and sope opera in English. I will be a elemantary school teacher so I will teach students in English class speaking English. That reason why I want to study English.I should develop my English ability for my students.Yes,I love my students so much and I hope me to be a professional person as a teacher. Therefore I want to study English.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Kim,

          This is your Teacher Verna. Thank you for writing your homework. I appreciate your effort in studying English.

I believe that you will be a great English speaker. I know also that you will do well as a teacher. Do your best always. 

 Take care. See you tomorrow!

-Verna-

I made sentences for question 3,4 on page 31,32.
>>I made sentences for questions 3 and4 on page 31,32.
First,I wrote the question number 3.
>>First, I wrote my answer about question number 3.
I am interested in English because I really want to speak well in English so I would like to study English first.

>>Correct

>> I'm interested in English because I want to speak English well so I prioritize learning English.
I have studied English for a long time but i can't speak English in public any simple daily routine conversation.

>>I have studied English for a long time but I can't speak English in public in any simple daily conversations.
I like sope opera such as 'friends','CSI'.

>> I like soap operas such as "Friends" and "CSI".
I envy the people who don't need to subtitle when they are watching movie and sope opera in English.

>> I envy people who don't need to use subtitle when they are watching movies or soap operas in English.
I will be a elemantary school teacher so I will teach students in English class speaking English.

>>I will be an elemantary school teacher so I will teach students in English speaking class.

That reason why I want to study English.

>>That's the reason why I want to study English.

I should develop my English ability for my students.

>>Correct

Yes,I love my students so much and I hope me to be a professional person as a teacher.

>> Yes, I love my students so much and I hope to be a professional teacher.
Therefore, I want to study English.

>>Correct

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