Hello Gleda!

2013-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Nice Wednesday! Today is a recycling day. We collect our trash for one week and assort once a week. I should go out and assort our home's trash after homework. ㅠㅠ Have a niceday. See you tomorrow. Here is my homework. In my case, I'm the former. I'm worried about doing thing right. I always make a plan before doing something. If not, I'm really concerned that something will be wrong. By planing before doing something I relieve although it is slow. And by plaining I think, I would be able to get satisfying result!

강사 첨삭

Hi there again! ~_^ It was always fun having class with. I enjoy listening to your answers and ideas because you always give interesting thoughts. So just continue practicing and don\'t be afraid to make mistakes because it\'s one way for us to learn and improve. ^_^ Always take care. -T. Glenda- Nice Wednesday! Today is a recycling day. >> CORRECT! ;) We collect our trash for one week and assort once a week. >> CORRECT! ;) I should go out and assort our home\'s trash after homework. >> CORRECT! ;) ㅠㅠ Have a niceday. See you tomorrow.Here is my homework.In my case, I\'m the former. >> CORRECT! ;) I\'m worried about doing thing right. >> I;m worried about doing things right. I always make a plan before doing something. >> CORRECT! ;) If not, I\'m really concerned that something will be wrong. >> CORRECT! ;) By planing before doing something I relieve although it is slow. >> CORRECT! ;) (relieved) And by plaining I think, I would be able to get satisfying result! >> CORRECT! ;) >> And by planning, I think I would be able to get a satisfying result!

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