Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning teacher! Nice to meet you. I think I will have a nice class with you and develop my English skill. Have a nice day, see you tomorrow!
Here is my homework.
I agree with this paragraph. Some of people nearby me just make a goal not to plan or try to do. Then they complain about reality. I think it is wrong. Every time I read a book about the story of famous CEO like Steve Jobs, or Mark Zuckerberg, I always know that we should have a not only goal but also plan and try to do. So I would like to effort like them.
강사 첨삭
Hello there James!
I commend you for doing your homework on our first day. :D
You have a very big potential and with your determination I know you\'ll go a long way.
As they say, a lot of people is trying to accomplish something big, not realizing that life is made up of little things. Good job! Keep it up!
A magnificent day ahead. ^^
-T. Glenda-
Good morning teacher! Nice to meet you.
>> (It was so nice meeting you too.) ^_^
I think I will have a nice class with you and develop my English skill. Have a nice day, see you tomorrow!
>> ^_^ (Thank you!)Here is my homework.
I agree with this paragraph.
>> Correct! ^^
Some of people nearby me just make a goal not to plan or try to do.
>> Some people nearby me are just making goals but not planning or trying.
Then they complain about reality.
>> Correct! ^^ (I definitely agree)
I think it is wrong.
>> Correct! ^^
Every time I read a book about the story of famous CEO like Steve Jobs, or Mark Zuckerberg, >> Correct! ^^
I always know that we should have a not only goal but also plan and try to do.
>> Correct! ^^
>> Or I always know that we should have not only goals but also plans and action.
So I would like to effort like them.
>> Correct! ^^
>> Or So I would like to be like them.
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