Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! It's a nice Wednesday. I think your class is really interesting. I think you ask me topic very interestingly. I like it!
I hope that you have a nice Wednesday. Then see you tomorrow~
Here is my homework.
I'd like to talk about the period that I prepared to take Toeic speaking test. After finishing my Eroupe trip, I was very inspired from trip. So I made up my mind to be crazy about speaking English. So I apply to Toeic speaking test. Be honest it was really hard time. I usually speak English more that 12 hours a day. Sometimes I felt it was really boring. However I really wanted to get a high score and overcome speaking Englsih. So I endured everything. Finally I got a high score! With this score I will be able to get a scholarship from school next year. With this test, I could have a big accomplishment. And now I prepare Tofel to be an exchange student. I really wanna live in foreign country. Although Tofel is horribly difficult (more than any other test!), I hope that I can endure this too and finally become exchange student.
강사 첨삭
Hello there James!
Again thank you for spending time to share to me about your thoughts.
With your attitude, I know that you can make it. It only takes determination and right
attitude/ character to be able to reach our dream. As I can see, you are the type of a person
who doesn\'t easily give up and that\'s a big factor to make your dream into reality.
\"Desire is the key to motivation, but it\'s determination and commitment to an unrelenting pursuit of your goal - a commitment to excellence - that will enable you to attain the success you seek.
-Mario Andretti-
-T. Glenda-
Hello! It\'s a nice Wednesday.
>> ^_^ (It is.)
I think your class is really interesting.
>> ^_^ (Thank you)
I think you ask me topic very interestingly. I like it!
>> CORRECT! :)>> Or I think you are asking me very interesting topics. I hope that you have a nice Wednesday.
>> ^_^ (You too.)
Then see you tomorrow~
>> CORRECT! :)
>> Or See you tomorrow then.
Here is my homework.I\'d like to talk about the period that I prepared to take Toeic speaking test.
>> CORRECT! :)
>> I\'d like to talk about the time that I prepared for the Toeic speaking test.
After finishing my Eroupe trip, I was very inspired from trip.
>> CORRECT! :)
>> Or After my trip in Eroupe, I was very inspired.
So I made up my mind to be crazy about speaking English.
>> CORRECT! :) (That was a good decision. :D)
So I apply to Toeic speaking test.
>> So I applied for TOEIC Speaking Test.
Be honest it was really hard time.
>> CORRECT! :)
>> Or To be honest, I really had a hard time.
I usually speak English more that 12 hours a day.
>> I usually speak English for more that 12 hours a day.
Sometimes I felt it was really boring.
>> CORRECT! :)
However I really wanted to get a high score and overcome speaking Englsih.
>> CORRECT! :) (English)
So I endured everything.
>> CORRECT! :)
Finally I got a high score! With this score I will be able to get a scholarship from school next year.
>> CORRECT! :)
With this test, I could have a big accomplishment.
>> With this test, I can have a big accomplishment.
And now I prepare Tofel to be an exchange student.
>> And now I\'m preparing for TOEFL to be an exchange student.
I really wanna live in foreign country.
>> CORRECT! :)
>> Or I really wanna live in a foreign country.
Although Tofel is horribly difficult (more than any other test!),
>> CORRECT! :) (TOEFL)
I hope that I can endure this too and finally become exchange student.
>> CORRECT! :)
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