Hello Glenda!

2013-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello! It's a nice Wednesday. I think your class is really interesting. I think you ask me topic very interestingly. I like it! I hope that you have a nice Wednesday. Then see you tomorrow~ Here is my homework. I'd like to talk about the period that I prepared to take Toeic speaking test. After finishing my Eroupe trip, I was very inspired from trip. So I made up my mind to be crazy about speaking English. So I apply to Toeic speaking test. Be honest it was really hard time. I usually speak English more that 12 hours a day. Sometimes I felt it was really boring. However I really wanted to get a high score and overcome speaking Englsih. So I endured everything. Finally I got a high score! With this score I will be able to get a scholarship from school next year. With this test, I could have a big accomplishment. And now I prepare Tofel to be an exchange student. I really wanna live in foreign country. Although Tofel is horribly difficult (more than any other test!), I hope that I can endure this too and finally become exchange student.

강사 첨삭

Hello there James! Again thank you for spending time to share to me about your thoughts. With your attitude, I know that you can make it. It only takes determination and right attitude/ character to be able to reach our dream. As I can see, you are the type of a person who doesn\'t easily give up and that\'s a big factor to make your dream into reality. \"Desire is the key to motivation, but it\'s determination and commitment to an unrelenting pursuit of your goal - a commitment to excellence - that will enable you to attain the success you seek. -Mario Andretti- -T. Glenda- Hello! It\'s a nice Wednesday. >> ^_^ (It is.) I think your class is really interesting. >> ^_^ (Thank you) I think you ask me topic very interestingly. I like it! >> CORRECT! :)>> Or I think you are asking me very interesting topics. I hope that you have a nice Wednesday. >> ^_^ (You too.) Then see you tomorrow~ >> CORRECT! :) >> Or See you tomorrow then. Here is my homework.I\'d like to talk about the period that I prepared to take Toeic speaking test. >> CORRECT! :) >> I\'d like to talk about the time that I prepared for the Toeic speaking test. After finishing my Eroupe trip, I was very inspired from trip. >> CORRECT! :) >> Or After my trip in Eroupe, I was very inspired. So I made up my mind to be crazy about speaking English. >> CORRECT! :) (That was a good decision. :D) So I apply to Toeic speaking test. >> So I applied for TOEIC Speaking Test. Be honest it was really hard time. >> CORRECT! :) >> Or To be honest, I really had a hard time. I usually speak English more that 12 hours a day. >> I usually speak English for more that 12 hours a day. Sometimes I felt it was really boring. >> CORRECT! :) However I really wanted to get a high score and overcome speaking Englsih. >> CORRECT! :) (English) So I endured everything. >> CORRECT! :) Finally I got a high score! With this score I will be able to get a scholarship from school next year. >> CORRECT! :) With this test, I could have a big accomplishment. >> With this test, I can have a big accomplishment. And now I prepare Tofel to be an exchange student. >> And now I\'m preparing for TOEFL to be an exchange student. I really wanna live in foreign country. >> CORRECT! :) >> Or I really wanna live in a foreign country. Although Tofel is horribly difficult (more than any other test!), >> CORRECT! :) (TOEFL) I hope that I can endure this too and finally become exchange student. >> CORRECT! :)

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