Hello Glenda!

2013-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Good morning teacher! Finally it's a nice Friday. Finally I can get out of Toefl and take a rest. I hope that you have a nice time with your love one. Have a nice weekend. See you on Monday! Here is my homework. I think it is a very vague problem. You know the money that someone earn is his own effort. If we take his money as he has a lot, he might have a dissatisfaction. But morally, I think if we have something a lot, we should share our property for poor people obligatorily. But you know, although many contury try to help poor people, it is not going to well. So I think, all of people should have a little attetion to this problem.

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Hello there James! It sure is \"thank God it\'s Friday\" :D Thank you for the thoughts. I hope that you would also endjoy and have a refreshing weekend. -T. Glenda- Good morning teacher! Finally it\'s a nice Friday. >> CORRECT! :) (Yes It is definitely a very good day) Finally I can get out of Toefl and take a rest. >> CORRECT! :D I hope that you have a nice time with your love one. Have a nice weekend. See you on Monday! >> CORRECT! :)Here is my homework.I think it is a very vague problem. >> CORRECT! :) You know the money that someone earn is his own effort. >> CORRECT! :) If we take his money as he has a lot, he might have a dissatisfaction. >> CORRECT! :) But morally, I think if we have something a lot, we should share our property for poor people obligatorily. >> CORRECT! :) >> Or But morally, I think if we have a lot, we should share it to the poor people.  But you know, although many contury try to help poor people, it is not going to well. >> CORRECT! :) (Just the spelling) >> (country) So I think, all of people should have a little attetion to this problem. >> CORRECT! :)

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