Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a great Tuesday! Today weather is really great, it's cool and stop raining out side. Now I'm agonizing which menu I choose for lunch. Because my mother is not home today. I will just go to buy something. Have a nice day~! See you tomorrow.
Here is my homework.
For the first question, I want the people in the year 2200 to know about condition of enviroment. Do you still have a pure air? or since the glacier has been melting, are there any country fallen down to sea? or Do you still have a natural resource like gasoline?. But for the first, I want people to pioneer the other planets.
And for second question, I think it is better to repersnt our entertainment things. Because it is intererting topic for everyone.
강사 첨삭
Hello there James! ^_^
Yeah, it is truely a great day today. I like that you are using very good vocabularies in your homework and in our class. Good job for that because as they say, practice makes permanent. It is the best way to learn things and to improve your English speaking skills.
Keep it up! ^_^
-T. Glenda-
It\'s a great Tuesday!
Today weather is really great, it\'s cool and stop raining out side.
>> The weather today is really great, it\'s cool and it stopped raining outside.
Now I\'m agonizing which menu I choose for lunch.
>> Now I\'m having a dilemma what to eat for lunch. ;-)
Because my mother is not home today.
>> Correct! ;)
I will just go to buy something. Have a nice day~! See you tomorrow.>> I will just go out and buy something. ;-)Here is my homework.For the first question, I want the people in the year 2200 to know about condition of enviroment.
>> For the first question, I want the people in the year 2200 to know about the condition of the environment.
Do you still have a pure air? or since the glacier has been melting, are there any country fallen down to sea?
>> Do you still have a fresh air? or since the glacier has been melting, are there any country or land that sank into the sea?
or Do you still have a natural resource like gasoline?.
>> Correct! ;)
>> Or Do you still have natural resources like gasoline?
But for the first, I want people to pioneer the other planets.
>> But for the first, I want people to pioneer to the other planets.And for second question, I think it is better to repersnt our entertainment things.
>> And for the second question, I think our best representation is our entertainment industry.
Because it is intererting topic for everyone.
>> Correct! ;)
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