Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~ it's a fantastic Friday again. Oh! it's a rainy out again! The broad caster said it will be rainy all weekend. Oh...I should stay home again... Anyway I'm happy to have a weekend! Enjoy your weekend! See you Monday~
Here is my homework.
1. Willie had a bushy and long beard and droopy moustache.
2. The old man silently handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman.
3. The man handed me a torn photograph of a young woman.
강사 첨삭
Hello there James!
It\'s Friday and most people are excited and anxious about it even without reason.
I hope that you would also have a magnificent weekend even it\'s raining. ~_^
Nice one with your homework. All of your sentences are correct. Good job!
Take care and see you!
-T. Glenda-
Hello~ it\'s a fantastic Friday again.
>> Correct! :)
Oh! it\'s a rainy out again!
>> Correct! :)
>> Or Oh! it\'s raining outside again.The broad caster said it will be rainy all weekend.
>> Correct! :)
>> The broadcaster said that it will rain all weekend.
Oh...I should stay home again... Anyway I\'m happy to have a weekend! Enjoy your weekend! >> Correct! :)
See you Monday~Here is my homework.1. Willie had a bushy and long beard and droopy moustache.
>> Correct! :)
>> Or Willie had a long, bushy beard and a droopy moustache.2. The old man silently handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman.
>> Correct! :)
>> Or Silently, the old man handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman.3. The man handed me a torn photograph of a young woman.
>> Correct! :)
>> The man handed me a torn and faded photograph of a young woman.
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