Hello Glenda!

2013-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Hello~ it's a fantastic Friday again. Oh! it's a rainy out again! The broad caster said it will be rainy all weekend. Oh...I should stay home again... Anyway I'm happy to have a weekend! Enjoy your weekend! See you Monday~ Here is my homework. 1. Willie had a bushy and long beard and droopy moustache. 2. The old man silently handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman. 3. The man handed me a torn photograph of a young woman.

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Hello there James! It\'s Friday and most people are excited and anxious about it even without reason. I hope that you would also have a magnificent weekend even it\'s raining. ~_^ Nice one with your homework. All of your sentences are correct. Good job! Take care and see you! -T. Glenda- Hello~ it\'s a fantastic Friday again. >> Correct! :) Oh! it\'s a rainy out again! >> Correct! :) >> Or Oh! it\'s raining outside again.The broad caster said it will be rainy all weekend. >> Correct! :) >> The broadcaster said that it will rain all weekend. Oh...I should stay home again... Anyway I\'m happy to have a weekend! Enjoy your weekend! >> Correct! :) See you Monday~Here is my homework.1. Willie had a bushy and long beard and droopy moustache. >> Correct! :) >> Or Willie had a long, bushy beard and a droopy moustache.2. The old man silently handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman. >> Correct! :) >> Or Silently, the old man handed me a photograph of a beautiful woman.3. The man handed me a torn photograph of a young woman. >> Correct! :) >> The man handed me a torn and faded photograph of a young woman.

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