Hello Glenda!

2013-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello Teacher~ It's a nice weather today. It is really hard to come up with some words that I want to say! The words that I wanted to say in class is ' The army is composed as a hierarchy' and ' Teacher never stick to her belief'. Anyway, may me I would have to memorize more word to speak smoothly. Have a nice day~~ Here is my homework. 1.In my opinion, it depends on the frequency. I mean you know, knowlege gained from experience is more easy to feel and understand and remain more longer. But it is hard to have a chance and sometimes we can be hurt from experience. So I like to gain knowlege from books. We don't have to spend much time and we can experience extermly lots of things that we will never experience our own. So I like the latter moer.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon. Thank you for sharing your opinion.

Gaining knowledge is very important; and books and experiences could give us great learnings.

Have a happy afternoon.

-Teacher Glenda-

Hello Teacher~

>> Correct.

It\'s a nice weather today.

>> The weather is nice today.

It is really hard to come up with some words that I want to say!

>> Correct.

The words that I wanted to say in class is \' The army is composed as a hierarchy\' and \' Teacher never stick to her belief\'.

>> The sentence that I wanted to say in the class is \' The army is composed of a hierarchy\' and \' The teacher never sticks to her belief\'.

Anyway, may me I would have to memorize more word to speak smoothly.

>> Anyway, maybe I have to study and memorize more words so I can speak smoothly/fluently.

Have a nice day~~

>> Correct.
Here is my homework.
1.In my opinion, it depends on the frequency. 

>> Correct.

I mean you know, knowlege gained from experience is more easy to feel and understand and remain more longer.

>> Knowledge gained from experience is easier to feel and understand and we don\'t forget them. 

But it is hard to have a chance and sometimes we can be hurt from experience.

>> But it is hard to have a chance and sometimes we can be hurt from our experience.

So I like to gain knowledge from books. 

>> Correct.

We don\'t have to spend much time and we can experience extremely lots of things that we will never experience our own.

>> Correct.

So I like the latter more.

>> Correct.

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