Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon. Thank you for sharing your opinion.
Gaining knowledge is very important; and books and experiences could give us great learnings.
Have a happy afternoon.
-Teacher Glenda-
Hello Teacher~
>> Correct.
It\'s a nice weather today.
>> The weather is nice today.
It is really hard to come up with some words that I want to say!
>> Correct.
The words that I wanted to say in class is \' The army is composed as a hierarchy\' and \' Teacher never stick to her belief\'.
>> The sentence that I wanted to say in the class is \' The army is composed of a hierarchy\' and \' The teacher never sticks to her belief\'.
Anyway, may me I would have to memorize more word to speak smoothly.
>> Anyway, maybe I have to study and memorize more words so I can speak smoothly/fluently.
Have a nice day~~
Here is my homework.
1.In my opinion, it depends on the frequency.
>> Correct.
I mean you know, knowlege gained from experience is more easy to feel and understand and remain more longer.
>> Knowledge gained from experience is easier to feel and understand and we don\'t forget them.
But it is hard to have a chance and sometimes we can be hurt from experience.
>> But it is hard to have a chance and sometimes we can be hurt from our experience.
So I like to gain knowledge from books.
>> Correct.
We don\'t have to spend much time and we can experience extremely lots of things that we will never experience our own.
>> Correct.
So I like the latter more.
>> Correct.
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