Hello Glenda!

2013-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Good evening~! Thank you for giving me a lot of tips. Each of one is very helpful improving my English skills. First I will follow your tips that is to speak loudly. By reading loudly I may be able to correct my grammer problem naturally. See you tomorrow~! Here is my homework. Teacher I think, today homework is same with yesterday homework. As I mentioned alreay, experiencing my self is more useful and I don't forget them. However it is hard to have a chance often and sometimes I can be hurt from our experience. So I perfer to gain knowlge from book.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening!!! I am glad to know that you are willing to follow my adive. I expect improvements in your performance from now on. It is true that people learn more from experience. Don\'t be scared to get hurt because we learn best from our mistakes. See you! T.Sheela Good evening~! Thank you for giving me a lot of tips. >>Correct! Each of one is very helpful improving my English skills. >> Each one of it  are very helpful in improving my English skills. First, I will follow your tips that is to speak loudly. >>Correct! By reading loudly I may be able to correct my grammer problem naturally. >>By reading loudly, I can be able to correct my grammar problem naturally.See you tomorrow~!>>Correct!Here is my homework.>>Correct!Teacher I think, today homework is same with yesterday homework. >>Teacher,I think, today\'s homework is the same with yesterday\'s homework. As I mentioned alreay, experiencing my self is more useful and I don\'t forget them. >>As what I mentioned already, experiencing through myself is more useful since I don\'t easily forget them. However it is hard to have a chance often and sometimes I can be hurt from our experience. >> However, it is hard to often have the chance and sometimes, I can be hurt from that experience. So I perfer to gain knowlge from book. >>So, I prefer gaining knowledge from the book.

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