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Hello~ Teacher. Thank you for giving me a nice tip starting a day happilly. You know it is very easy to know deciding to be happy when I start my day. But nowadays I get a little lots of stress due to Tofle. So I often start day gloomy. I will try to start my day to be happy since tomorrow. See you tomorrow~~ Here is my homework. When I was senior in high school, I really wanted to get a high score in my SAT. However, although I tried to do my best, I couldn't get a satisfied score. I lost my morale and I was a little depressed, but I never regreted about my result because I did my best. So I applied my application and waited until they would notify result. I really desired to go university that I applied it. Fortunatly I would be able to get in that university almost last one. That make my life extremly happier and thanks to this experience I can have a confidence that if I try to do my best, I might be able to get something that I want.

Hi there^^ Good evening^^. Good job in this composition. I can see how you expressed your thoughts well. Keep it up and just be guided with your sentence structure. I commend you for always doing good in everything. I know that in time you will have  bright future, and you deserve it because you just did your best. See you in class!   Hello~ Teacher. >>Correct >>OR: Hello teacher! Thank you for giving me a nice tip starting a day happilly. >>Thank you for giving a nice tip in how to start the day happilly. You know it is very easy to know deciding to be happy when I start my day. >>You know that it is very easy to decide wether you you will be happy when you start your day. But nowadays I get a little lots of stress due to Tofle. >>But nowadays, I get lots of stress due to my TOEFL. So I often start day gloomy. >>So I often start my day gloomy. I will try to start my day to be happy since tomorrow. >>I will try to start my day to be happy starting tomorrow.See you tomorrow~~>>CorrectHere is my homework.>>CorrectWhen I was senior in high school, I really wanted to get a high score in my SAT. >>Correct However, although I tried to do my best, I couldn\'t get a satisfied score. >>However, although I tried to do my best, I couldn\'t get a satisfying score. I lost my morale and I was a little depressed, but I never regreted about my result because I did my best. >>Correct So I applied my application and waited until they would notify result. >>So I applied my application and waited until they would notify the result. I really desired to go university that I applied it. >>I really wanted to go to the university that I applied. Fortunatly I would be able to get in that university almost last one. >>Luckily, I was able to get in that university. That make my life extremly happier and thanks to this experience I can have a confidence that if I try to do my best, I might be able to get something that I want. >>That made my life extremely happier and thanks to his experience because I gained confidence. I also learned through this expreince that I try to do my best, I might be able to get things that I want.