Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon teacher~ The sun comes out after a long time. I definitly will be able to play basketball today. Since nowaday is rainy season , so atmosphere has been so moist and unpleasunt. I think it will go better before. Anyway have a nice day and see you tomorrow~
Here is my homework.
There are many influential people in my life. Today I'd like to talk about Myazaki Hayao who is worldest famous animation director. After I watched his work , I was so impressed about his imagination and substence. I was so moved and I had a dream that someday I'd like to be a animation director like him. Ofcourse now I gave up that dream thanks to him I can have a dream that after I retire let study about animation. Also thanks to him I enjoy watching nice animation that is my one of the most like hobby. So that's why he is a person who influence my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you so much for doing your homework and for sharing something great to me. I want you to know that I always enjoy our classes and I hope that you are also having fun while learning something from me.
T. Glenda ^^
Good afternoon teacher~
>>Correct!
The sun comes out after a long time.
>>Finally, the sun came out after a long period of time.
I definitly will be able to play basketball today.
>>Correct!
>>OR: I will definitely be able to play basketball again today. (spellcheck: definitely)
Since nowaday is rainy season , so atmosphere has been so moist and unpleasunt.
>>Since its rainy season nowadays, the atmosphere had been so moist and unpleasant.
I think it will go better before.
>>I think it was better before.
Anyway have a nice day and see you tomorrow~
>>Correct!Here is my homework.>>Here is my homework:
There are many influential people in my life.
>>Correct!
Today I\'d like to talk about Myazaki Hayao who is worldest famous animation director.
>>Today, I \'d like to talk about Miyazaki Hayao who is a world\'s famous animation director. (spellcheck: Miyazaki ^^)
After I watched his work , I was so impressed about his imagination and substence.
>>After I saw his works, I was so impressed in his imagination and substance. (spellcheck: substance)
I was so moved and I had a dream that someday I\'d like to be a animation director like him. >>I was so moved and had dreamed that someday I would like to be an animation director like him.
Ofcourse now I gave up that dream thanks to him I can have a dream that after I retire let study about animation. >>Ofcourse as of the moment I gave up that dream, but thanks to him, I can have a dream that after I retire I will study animation.
Also thanks to him I enjoy watching nice animation that is my one of the most like hobby.
>>Also, thanks to him, I enjoy watching nice anims which is one of my favorite hobbies.
So that\'s why he is a person who influence my life.
>>So that is why he is a person who influenced my life.
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