Hello Glenda!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A fun Monday to you:)
Thanks for sending your composition.
Your effort is greatly appreciated^^
I also agree that without effort/hardwork a person could never succeed.
Enjoy your day ahead:)
Hi teacher~ I\'m sorry for late my homework. I forgot it. ㅠㅠ
>>Hi teacher~~I\'m sorry for sending my homework late. I forgot it.
The weather becomes more and more hot. Take care your health.
>>The weather becomes hotter. Take care of your health.
I\'m going to swim on the weekend.
>>I\'m going swimming on the weekend.
I hope that you have a nice weekend too.
>>Correct!
See you on Monday!
>>Correct!
Here is my homework.
>>Correct!
I think the most important thing is effort.
>>Correct!
No matter how someone is lucky if he doesn\'y make an any effort, he will not be able to achieve anything.
>>No matter how lucky someone is,if he doesn\'t exert any effort, he will not be able to achieve anything.
I\'d like to quote some paragraph from the writer Bernard Werber.
>>I\'d like to quote a paragraph from the writer Bernard Werber.
There are three main thing composing of success.\'Luck\',\'Effort\',\'Talent\'.
>>There are three main things composing success; luck, effort,talent.
The best is to have all of things.
>>The best is to have all those things.
But the book siad that if someone has two of three thing, he will succeed.
>>But the book said that if someone has two of the three things,he will succeed.
I mean if he never makes an any effort but if he has a talent and luck, he will succeed.
>>I mean if he never makes any effort but he has a talent and luck, he will succeed.
I agree this sentence.
>>I agree to this sentences/ statement.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.