Hello Glenda!

Hi teacher~. It is fine that you are okay now. You know take care in rainy season^^ Tomorrow is a war. In order to take courses that I want, I should spent at least 2 hours just for taking 7 classes. In this season every students prepare for the registration war. HA HA HA. Anyway I really hope that I will be able to take courses that I want. Take care~ See you two days later. Here is my homework. Teacher I already write about this topic so I try to write about my opinion considering correction. I'd like to change a region Silicon Valley. Because Silicon Valley is a the warld's famous region for technology. And many famous ceo are from that place just like Steve jobs or Mark zukerberg and so on. So if our country has like that region, not only many people can have a change to be successful on the state of the art but also our country will be developed by many tanlent people. So that's why I'd like to make this region.

Hello! ^^

Thanks for the thoughts that you have shared in making your composition.

My mistake. I\'m sorry.

I was not able to double check the homework that I sent you.

Anyway, I still thank you for doing so.

Anyhow, I wish you luck in your registration.

I hope that you will be able to get the course that you want.
Of course you will.

I\'ll see you then after two days,

Take care! ^^

T. Glenda^^

 Hi teacher~. 

>> CORRECT

It is fine that you are okay now.

>> It\'s good to know that you are okay now.

You know take care in rainy season^^

>> You should take acre of yourself because it\'s rainy season.
Tomorrow is a war.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: It\'s a war tomorrow.

In order to take courses that I want, I should spent at least 2 hours just for taking 7 classes.

>> In order to take the courses that I want, I spend at least 2 hours just to take 7 classes.

In this season every students prepare for the registration war. HA HA HA.

>> In this season, every student prepares for the registration war. HA HA HA.

Anyway I really hope that I will be able to take courses that I want.

>> Anyway, I really hope that I will be able to to take the course that I want. 

Take care~

>> CORRECT

See you two days later.
>> See you after two days!
Here is my homework.
>> CORRECT
Teacher I already write about this topic so I try to write about my opinion considering correction.

>> Teacher, I have already written about this topic so I will try to write my opinion considering the corrections given before. 

 I\'d like to change a region Silicon Valley.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I\'d like to change a region like the Silicon valley.

Because Silicon Valley is a the warld\'s famous region for technology.

>> CORRECT (spelling-world)

And many famous ceo are from that place just like Steve jobs or Mark zukerberg and so on.

>> And many famous CEO\'s are from that place just like Steve Jobs, Mark Zukerberg and so on.

So if our country has like that region, not only many people can have a change to be successful on the state of the art but also our country will be developed by many tanlent people.

>> ........ but also our country will be developed by many talented people.

So that\'s why I\'d like to make this region.

>> CORRECT