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Good afternoon! Thank you for granting my favor that you correct my essay. I really appreciate, you know I have been study alone. So there is no one correct my mistake. Thank you again. Anyway have a nice day! See you tomorrow~ Here is my essay. The lecturer discusses Hydrogen energy as a alternative energy and argues that the advantages are overstated and the disadvantages are ignored. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that Hydrogen is an ideal energy. First, the lecturer argues that obtaining Hydrogen energy cost huge expense. So it is more expensive renewable energy than fossil fuel. This casts doubts on the reading passage's claim that the Hydrogen is much cheaper than nonrenewable energy. Second, the lecturer claims that in order to obtain Hydrogen energy, we should use power plant. It means we cannot but use fossil fuel. This counters that the Hydrogen is environmentally friendly. Last, the lecturer mentions that it is not easy to store and trans port. It is too heavy to store and transport as a alloy that it weigh 300 pounds just a tank. This refutes the reading passage's claim that it is easy to store and trans port. (I'm sorry it's too long haha ^^;;)

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>> Correct.

Thank you for granting my favor that you correct my essay.

>>  Thank you for granting my favor to correct my essay.

I really appreciate, you know I have been study alone.

>>  I really appreciate it, you know I have been studying alone.

So there is no one correct my mistake.

>> So there is no one to correct my mistakes.

Thank you again. Anyway have a nice day! See you tomorrow~

>> Correct.
Here is my essay.
>> Correct.

The lecturer discusses Hydrogen energy as a alternative energy and argues that the advantages are overstated and the disadvantages are ignored.

>> The lecturer discusses Hydrogen energy as an alternative energy and argues that the advantages are overstated and the disadvantages are ignored.

This contradicts the reading passage\'s claim that Hydrogen is an ideal energy.

>> Correct.

 First, the lecturer argues that obtaining Hydrogen energy cost huge expense. 

>> Firstly, the lecturer argues that obtaining Hydrogen energy costs huge expense. 

So it is more expensive renewable energy than fossil fuel.

>>  So it is a more expensive renewable energy than fossil fuel.

This casts doubts on the reading passage\'s claim that the Hydrogen is much cheaper than nonrenewable energy.

>> This caused doubts on the reading passage\'s claim that Hydrogen is cheaper than nonrenewable energy.

Second, the lecturer claims that in order to obtain Hydrogen energy, we should use power plant. It means we cannot but use fossil fuel.

>>  Secondly, the lecturer claims that in order to obtain Hydrogen energy, we should use power plant.

It means we cannot but use fossil fuel.

>>  It means we cannot use fossil fuel.

This counters that the Hydrogen is environmentally friendly. 

>>It contradicts the statement that Hydrogen is environmental-friendly. 

Last, the lecturer mentions that it is not easy to store and trans port.

>>  Lastly, the lecturer mentions that it is not easy to store and transport it.

It is too heavy to store and transport as a alloy that it weigh 300 pounds just a tank.

>>  It is too heavy to store and transport just like an alloy that weighs 300 pounds like a tank.

This refutes the reading passage\'s claim that it is easy to store and trans port. 

>> Correct.

(I\'m sorry it\'s too long haha ^^;;)

>> Correct.