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Good afternoon! It's a nice Tuesday. There lightened and thundered so strongly. Our apartment was in power cut for 30 minutes. I was so confused. I think it was a last rain in our area. HAHAHA. Anyway today, as same as yesterday, I will write essay for TOEFL. Thank you for correcting again. Have a nice day~ Here is my homework. The lecturer discusses the group study and argues that it is not beneficial for students. This contradicts the reading passage's that group study has definite advantages for everyone. First, she argues that it decrease students' motivation. Because there are some students who don't have a responsibility and did not attend often. And some students are not reliable. This casts doubt the reading passage's claim that group study can motivate students to study. Second, she points out that some students feel that they would have learned more by studying alone. Because some students in the group can't follow or understands topic. They usually distract circumstance of study. and it is very common when they gather they start cheating about daily life. This counters the reading passage's claim that students learn more by studying together. Last, she claims that some students complain that it takes too much time to come and back to library. Most of students feel that it waste of time. This refutes the reading passage's claim that group study saves time for everyone.

Hi there [이름]! Thanks for sendins this composition. Please do check the corrections below. If you have questions, feel free to ask it during our class. Have a great day! See you in class. Teacher Glenda   Good afternoon! It\'s a nice Tuesday. >>correct! There lightened and thundered so strongly. >>It lightened and thundered so strongly. Our apartment was in power cut for 30 minutes. >>correct! OR >> There was a blackout for 30 minutes in out apartment.  I was so confused. >>correct! I think it was a last rain in our area. HAHAHA. >>I think it is the last rain in our area. HAHAHA. OR >> I think rainy days is over in our area. Anyway today, as same as yesterday, I will write essay for TOEFL. >>Anyway today,same as yesterday, I will write an essay for TOEFL. Thank you for correcting again. >>correct! OR >> Thank you for checking again. Have a nice day~>>correctHere is my homework.>>correctThe lecturer discusses the group study and argues that it is not beneficial for students. >>correct This contradicts the reading passage\'s that group study has definite advantages for everyone.  >>correct! // passages//First, she argues that it decrease students\' motivation. >>First, she argues that it decreases students\' motivation. Because there are some students who don\'t have a responsibility and did not attend often. >>Because there are some students who don\'t assume the responsibility and don\'t attend often. OR >> Because there are some students who ignore the responsibility and don\'t attend often. And some students are not reliable. >>correct! This casts doubt the reading passage\'s claim that group study can motivate students to study. >>correct!Second, she points out that some students feel that they would have learned more by studying alone. >>correct!  Because some students in the group can\'t follow or understands topic. >> Because some students in the group can\'t follow or understands the topic. They usually distract circumstance of study. >>They usually distract the circumstance of study. and it is very common when they gather they start cheating about daily life. >>And it is very common that when they gather they start cheating about daily life. This counters the reading passage\'s claim that students learn more by studying together. >>correctLast, she claims that some students complain that it takes too much time to come and back to library. >>Lastly, she claims that some students complain that it takes too much time to come and go back to the library. Most of students feel that it waste of time. >>Most of the students feel that it is just a waste of time. This refutes the reading passage\'s claim that group study saves time for everyone. >>correct!