Hello Glenda!
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Hi there^^,
Thank you for sending me your last essay!!!
I know that we will meet again!!
Anyhow, I am proud to say that you have improve.. Keep it up!!
I am very happy that you were my student!!
Anyway, Enjoy the rest of your day and take care!!
~T.Glenda~
Good after noon teacher.
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It was our last class ㅠㅠ.
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It was extremely helpful to improve my English skill. And I think you always try to ask a nice question for me not just reading a textbook.
>>It was extremely helpful to improve my English skill and I think that you always try to ask a nice question for me and you are not just reading the textbook.
In the past, I met some teacher just follow the book, so I was really boring and not much helpful.
>>In the past, I met some teacher who are just following the book. So I it was really boring and not much helpful.
Anyway thanks for giving me great tips again.
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I hope that we will meet again. Good bye~
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Here is my last essay.
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The lecturer discusses the first progressive income tax, known as the Revenue Act of 1862 and argues that it isn\'t beneficial policy for country.
>>The lecturer discussed the first progressive income tax, known as the Revenue Act of 1862 and argues that it isn\'t a beneficial policy for the country.
This contradicts the reading passage\'s claim that several favorable outcomes resulted from the implementation of this act.
>>This contradicts th reading passage which claims that several favorable outcome resulted from the implementation of this act.
First, he argues that it just covered less than 3 percent of cost of the war.
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>>First, he insist that it just covered less than 3 percent of the cost of the war.
The bulk of the cost was covered by luxury tax.
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This casts doubt on the reading passage\'s claim that the new tax was an essential component in fundraising to cover the high costs of the war.
>>This casts was doubt about the reading passage which claims that the new tax was an essential component in fund raising to cover the high costs of the war.
Second, he claims that this tactic discriminate upper class people.
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It just likes punishing them as their success and it is against America\'s democracy.
>>It\'s just like punishing them for their success and it is against America\'s democracy.
This counters the reading passage\'s claim that the beneficial aspect of the tax was its fairness.
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Last, he points out that giving a power to assess and collect taxes for federal government is to invade personal privacy and it is very offensive.
>>Lastly, he points out that giving a power to asses and collect taxes for federal government is invading personal privacy and it is very offensive.
This refutes the reading passage\'s claim that the act 몽 the praiseworthy effect.
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