Hello Grace

Hi Grace, How's it going? There is only one month left in 2010. Time seems to fly I hope you enjoy the last month of the year,2010 Please, check the following sentences if they are correct I have to inform as soon as possible my university of the result for graduation There is a growing concern that the current society is becoming more competivie than ever before what we need to keep in mind is the fairness of competition I will do to the best of my ability

Hi [이름], I am doing great! Thank you for asking. I agree, time really flies. We are approaching 2011 already. Isn't that great? I sure will enjoy December because of Christmas! Here are your corrections. I have to inform as soon as possible my university of the result for graduation>>I have to inquire about the result for graduation from my university as soon as possible. (I'm not sure if you are trying to know if you will be graduating or you need to inform the university of a specific result)There is a growing concern that the current society is becoming more competivie than ever before>> correctwhat we need to keep in mind is the fairness of competition>> correct.I will do to the best of my ability >>I will do the best of my ability