Hello, I\'m ha[이름].
학생이 쓴 원문
I grew up in seoul, south korea.
I moved to Australia for 5 days ago.
Although I was in Korea, I worked at a cafe and restaurants.
I Iearned coffee and latte art in korea really enjoy both customer service and making cofee.
I do hope to have opportunity to work for you.
I\'m look forward to hearing from you!
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ha [이름]. How are you? Thank you for trusting me with this, don\'t worry, let\'s make this perfect. T. Linda
>> I grew up in Seoul, South Korea.
I moved to Australia for 5 days ago.
>>I moved to Australia 5 days ago.
Although I was in Korea, I worked at a cafe and restaurants.
Back in Korea, I worked at cafes and restaurants.
I Iearned coffee and latte art in korea really enjoy both customer service and making cofee.
>>I Iearned coffee and latte art in Korea and really enjoy both customer service and making coffee.
I do hope to have opportunity to work for you.
>>I hope to have opportunity to work for you.
I\'m looking forward to hearing from you.
>> I\'m looking forward hearing from you.
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