Hello ^^ Jana

2009-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

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Hello mam. Jana I`m [이름]. I`m sorry, I have to study English, but I don`t have a computer. fortunateley I brought it now. ha~ ha. First one, This is my home work. - Enforce: Many communistic countries enforce thier idology on their citizen. - Implementation: After a new implemetation, our society will be fine.

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Woah!! You mean to say, you have your own computer already??? ^_^

I'm so happy for you [이름]!  Honestly , its one of my short-term goal (aside from buying a digicam, wink!) Although I have a computer at home, I still want to have one- that I can really call mine.Anyway, let me correct you:

 

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Hello mam. Jana I`m [이름].

>>Hello mam Jana I`m [이름].
I`m sorry, I have to study English, but I don`t have a computer.
fortunateley I brought it now. ha~ ha.

>>I뭢 not sorry for not being able to acces the computer whenever we study. Fortunately, I bought one today. Ha~~ha


First one, This is my home work.

>>First of all, this is my homework.


- Enforce: Many communistic countries enforce thier idology on their
citizen.
>>Communist nations enforce their ideologies to their citizens. 


Enforce:  

Implementation: After a new implementation, our society will be
fine.

 

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