Hello Jane,

2010-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

This is a continuous story of previous one. Unfortunately I couldn’t find a shop for be able to print it on my way. However, when I arrive at there, I encountered a classmate who is taking a same class. I got lucky!! Anyway, thanks to her, I could fill in the application form exactly. I have to go to the Embassy again to take my VISA in four days. You know what, if I were Japanese, I didn’t need to make a VISA to travel China. I felt little bit envious of Japanese students on this point. When I was done with application, another classmate came in the Embassy. Wow. I’d like to wait for her but I couldn’t. It was already 10:20. I was late for a class so I had to be hurry up. Sarah, whom I met at first, and I said bye to another friend and left.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I really appreciate your effort in writing a composition. Keep up the good work! Stay happy an enthusiastic! Jane   This is a continuous story of previous one. >> This is the continuation of my composition. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a shop for be able to print it on my way. >> Unfortunately, I couldn't find a shop where I could print it. However, when I arrive at there, I encountered a classmate who is taking same class. >> However, when I arrived there, I met my classmate. I got lucky! >> correct Anyway, thanks to her, I could fill in the application form exactly. >> Thanks to her, I could fill up the application form very well. I have to go to the Embassy again to take my VISA in four days >> I have to go to the Embassy again to get my VISA in four days. You know what, if I were Japanese, I didn't need to make a VISA to travel China >> You know, if I was a Japanese, I wouldn't have the need to make a VISA to travel to China. I felt little bit envious of Japanese students on this point. >> I felt a little bit envious of Japanese students at this point. When I was done my application, another classmate came in the Embassy. >> When I was done with my application, another classmate came at the Embassy. Wow >> correct I'd like to wait for her but I couldn't. >> correct It was already 10:20 >> correct I was late for a class so I had to be hurry up. >> I was late for my class so I had to hurry up Sarah, whom I met at first, and said bye to another friend and left. >>Sarah, whom I met first, said bye to another friend and left.  

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