Hello Jane,
학생이 쓴 원문
This is a continuous story of previous one.
Unfortunately I couldn’t find a shop for be able to print it on my way.
However, when I arrive at there, I encountered a classmate who is taking a same class. I got lucky!! Anyway, thanks to her, I could fill in the application form exactly. I have to go to the Embassy again to take my VISA in four days.
You know what, if I were Japanese, I didn’t need to make a VISA to travel China. I felt little bit envious of Japanese students on this point.
When I was done with application, another classmate came in the Embassy. Wow. I’d like to wait for her but I couldn’t. It was already 10:20. I was late for a class so I had to be hurry up.
Sarah, whom I met at first, and I said bye to another friend and left.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I really appreciate your effort in writing a composition. Keep up the good work! Stay happy an enthusiastic!
Jane
This is a continuous story of previous one.
>> This is the continuation of my composition.
Unfortunately, I couldn't find a shop for be able to print it on my way.
>> Unfortunately, I couldn't find a shop where I could print it.
However, when I arrive at there, I encountered a classmate who is taking same class.
>> However, when I arrived there, I met my classmate.
I got lucky!
>> correct
Anyway, thanks to her, I could fill in the application form exactly.
>> Thanks to her, I could fill up the application form very well.
I have to go to the Embassy again to take my VISA in four days
>> I have to go to the Embassy again to get my VISA in four days.
You know what, if I were Japanese, I didn't need to make a VISA to travel China
>> You know, if I was a Japanese, I wouldn't have the need to make a VISA to travel to China.
I felt little bit envious of Japanese students on this point.
>> I felt a little bit envious of Japanese students at this point.
When I was done my application, another classmate came in the Embassy.
>> When I was done with my application, another classmate came at the Embassy.
Wow
>> correct
I'd like to wait for her but I couldn't.
>> correct
It was already 10:20
>> correct
I was late for a class so I had to be hurry up.
>> I was late for my class so I had to hurry up
Sarah, whom I met at first, and said bye to another friend and left.
>>Sarah, whom I met first, said bye to another friend and left.
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