Hello Jane,

2010-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I feel I haven't written a composition so long. I totally forgot about it. From now on I'll write it every day. By the way, yesterday your voice was not good. Is it Okay? Didn't I tell you my workshop? Actually I have a lot of stories about my trip. But I couldn't because I was so tired and I didn't know how to start the stories. But I'd like to tell you it using this composition part. Okay. Let's start. It was really tough. The weather was not good. We had field survey for two days. The first day was good. But next day rained. To make matter worse, the day was surveying day on agricultural area. We had to walk on wet land and inside wet shrubs with camera, umbrella, note, and maps. That was so hard.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for writing a composition for me today! I really appreciate your effort because I know how busy you are. And thank you for asking about me. Yesterday, I had a sore throat that's why my voice was bad. But now I'm okay. JanE ^^ I feel I haven't written a composition so long. >> I feel like I haven't written a composition for a long time. I totally forgot about it. >> correct From now on I'll write it everyday. >> correct By the way, yesterday your voice was not good. >>correct Is it okay? >> Is it okay now? Didn't I tell you my workshop? >> Didn't I tell you about my workshop? Actually I have a lot of stories about my trip. >> correct But I couldn't because I was so tired and I didn't know how to start the stories. >> correct But I'd like to tell you it using this composition part. >> But I'd like to tell you about it using this part of the composition. Okay. Let's start. It was really tough. The weather was not good.>> correct We had field survey for two days.  The first day was good. >> correct But next day rained. To make matter worse, the day was surveying day on agricultural area. >> But it rained the next day. Worse, that was our surveying day on agricultutal area. We had to walk on wet land and inside wet shrubs with camera, umbrella, note, and maps. >> We had to walk on mud and wet shrubs with camera, unbrealla, note, and maps. That was so hard. >> correct

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