Hello Jane,

In the morning, the weather wasn't good. But now there is a cool and pleasant breeze out. By the way, do you like billiards? I love it so much. When I was in University, I often went playing billiards with my friend. Sometimes I played the Internet games like Starcraft all day long even if the day was weekday. But most of all, I loved billiards. We played once a week at least. I feel exhilarated when I hear sound of hitting ball. However my partner quit the game when she became senior. After then I couldn't find another partner. Naturally I also quit billiards. Now I found a new partner to play it with. Although the playing cost is quite high I can't help stopping it. I think It'll be a way to relieve stress.

Hi Ms. [이름]!You can construct good sentences! Just be very careful in using verb tenses. Keep writing in order to enhance your skill. Keep up the good work!Jane ^^ In the morning, the weather wasn't good. >> correct But now there is a cool and pleasant breeze out.>> But now there is a cool and pleasant breeze. By the way, do you like billiards? I love it so much. >> correct When I was in University, I often went playing billiards with my friend. >> When I was in University, I often played billiards with my friends. Sometimes I played the Internet games like Starcraft all day long even if the day was weekday. >> Sometimes I played online games like Starcraft all day long even on weekdays. But most of all, I loved billiards. >> correct We played once a week at least. >> correct I feel exhilarated when I hear sound of hitting ball. >> I feel exhilarated when I hear the sound of balls being hit. However my partner quit the game when she became senior. >> correct After then I couldn't find another partner. >> correct Naturally I also quit billiards. >> So, I also quit playing billiards. Now I found a new partner to play it with. >> correct Although the playing cost is quite high I can't help stopping it. >> Although the game fee is quite high, I can't help but play. I think It'll be a way to relieve stress. >> I think it's a good way to relieve myself from stress.