Hello Jane,

There was a soccer game between Korea and Greece. Do you like sports? To tell the truth, I don’t like sports, both of watching and playing it. But, in regard of the national game like Worldcup or Olympic game, I can’t help watching the game. Yesterday, a Korean friend asked me that let’s watch the game together. So, I waited for her at home. Unfortunately, she couldn’t come on time. Eventually I watched it alone. Anyway, the Korean players played very well with composure yesterday so Korea team won by two goals to zero against Greece. I didn’t expect Korea team to win because though Korea is ranking no. 47, Greece is a powerful team of Fifa ranking no. 13. So, I was so glad our team won. A game between Korea and Argentine will be on next Thursday. I hope our team win also.

Hi [이름]! I'm so glad to receive a composition from you and update on the World Cup as well. Honestly, I don't like sports, but I also can't help watching it if the game is so interesting. Thanks for the update and please be guided by my corrections. Jane ^^   There was a soccer game between Korea and Greece. Do you like sports? >> correct!! To tell the truth, I don’t like sports, both of watching and playing it. >> To tell you the truth, I don't like playing or watching sports. But, in regard of the national game like Worldcup or Olympic game, I can’t help watching the game. >> But, with regards to National Game like World Cup or Olympic Game, I can't help watching it. Yesterday, a Korean friend asked me that let’s watch the game together. >> Yesterday, a Korean friend told me that we would watch the game together. So, I waited for her at home. Unfortunately, she couldn’t come on time. Eventually I watched it alone. >> correct!! Anyway, the Korean players played very well with composure yesterday so Korea team won by two goals to zero against Greece. >> correct!! I didn’t expect Korea team to win because though Korea is ranking no. 47, Greece is a powerful team of Fifa ranking no. 13. >> I didn't expect that Korean team would win because Greece is a powerful team ranking no. 13 compared to our team ranking no. 47. So, I was so glad our team won. >> correct!! A game between Korea and Argentine will be on next Thursday. >> A game between Korea and Argentina will be held on Thursday. I hope our team win also. >> I hope our team will win again.