Hello Janette

2011-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello Janette i'm [이름] I wonder about your mention Will i prepare to my introduction tomorrow? ToT.. Today i was embrassed Because i can't speak sentence.. I can speak just 'yes' or 'sorry?' I frustrated.. Teach me about speaking skill I will study hard ,too Really I want to have fluent speaking skill. for reference Now i am learning on cyber university and i study for transfer to new school Good night!

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Hi [이름] Thank you for making your compositons. I appreciate your Aeffort. Don\'t feel sad, that is why I am here for you to help you study English. Let\'s work together for you to become good in English. T. Jannette   Here are your corrctions: Hello Janette i\'m [이름] >>Hello Janette I\'m [이름].I wonder about your mention >>I wonder about the thing that you mentioned will i prepare to my introduction tomorrow? >>Will I prepare for my Introduction for tomorrow?ToT.. Today i was embrassed  >>Correct.Because i can\'t speak sentence.. >>Becasue I can\'t speak complete sentences.I can speak  just \'yes\' or \'sorry?\'  >>Correct.I frustrated.. >>I feel frustrated.Teach me about speaking skill >>Correct.I will study hard ,too >>Correct.Rellay i want to have fluent speaking skill. >>Really I want to become fluent in speaking English.for reference >>Correct.Now i am learning on cyber university and i study for transfer to new school >>Now I am learning on cyber university and I study for transfer to new schoolGood night! >>Correct.  

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