Hello, Joan.

2011-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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How do you do? I am a little tired. I stay still at university because of the midterm is coming. And I also ready study aboroad. I am so stressful but that's not problem. I am okay, I can everything for my successful living abroad. I wonder if you understand what I say last class, so one more write here. My friend said that I have too worry about the future. And so I am just too negative. I agree the former but disagree the latter. The reason of worry is necessery. If I don't thik and worry any thing, I will become Idiot. The worry is same The ready, I think so. Thesadays I learn 'how to enjoy' about study or something. Un, already very deep night. I couldn't eat a dinner. very hungry.

강사 첨삭

Hi Minjeong^^ Oh dear! Hello! Am feeling just fine, thanks. You're passion and devotion would take you further than you've ever thought of. Keep it up! I totally understood you last night, well as what I've said, you've got to put your best foot forward all the time. Use what you have learned, start from it and you'd do better when you'd focus. Just take time to stop and refocus yourself with the goal. Be refreshed and encouraged that Germany is waiting for your coming! ^^Here are some of the things I want you to study on. T' Joan How do you do? >>CORRECT! or >> How are you? ( How are you feeling these days?) I am a little tired. >>CORRECT! I stay still at university because of the midterm is coming. >>I'm still staying at the university because midterm is coming.And I also ready study aboroad. >>I'm also getting ready to study abroad.I am so stressful but that's not problem. >>I am so stressed but that's not problem. I am okay, I can everything for my successful living abroad. >> I am okay, I can do everything for my successful living abroad.I wonder if you understand what I say last class, so one more write here. >>I just wonder whether you understood what I told you in our last class or not, so I wrote it here one more time. My friend said that I have too worry about the future. >>My friend said that I have to worry about the future. And so I am just too negative. >>And so, I am just being too pessimistic. I agree the former but disagree the latter. >> I agree the former but I disagree with the latter. The reason of worry is necessery. >> Worrying is necessary. If I don't thik and worry any thing, I will become Idiot. >> If I don't think and worry about anything, I will become an idiot. The worry is same The ready, I think so. >>I think worrying is the same as getting ready.Thesadays I learn 'how to enjoy' about study or something. >>These days I learned how to enjoy studying or doing something else.Un, already very deep night. >>Uh, it's already late night. I couldn't eat a dinner. >>I couldn't eat dinner. very hungry. >> I'm very hungry.

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