Hello Juliet!

2013-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon Juliet! Nice to meet you. I hope that we have a nice by practicing English together. I believe that more and more I will be comfortable to speak English later. For that time I will try to do my best. Anyway nice to meet you! See you next morning and enjoy your lunch~ Above all, English reading is the most important in my daily life. Because all of my book are written in English. So sometimes I am hard to translate English to Korean. And I should take more times to understand. So reading is the most important now. But after getting a job, I will place the emphasis on speaking. Because I'd like to work international if I can and speaking is the funnest thing. Whatever I practice, in order to work in my field English is very important in my daily life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^ It was really nice to meet you too^^ I am sure that we will have a great time together^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. If you have some questions just ask me in our class^^ I\'ll see you on Monday^^ Enjoy the rest of your day and take care^^ Have a great weekend^^ ~T.Juliet^^ Good afternoon Juliet! Nice to meet you. >>CORRECT^^ I hope that we have a nice by practicing English together. >>I hope that we will have a great time studying English together. I believe that more and more I will be comfortable to speak English later. >>CORRECT^^ For that time I will try to do my best. Anyway nice to meet you! >>For that, I will try to do my best. Anyway, nice to meet you! See you next morning and enjoy your lunch~>>CORRECT^^Above all, English reading is the most important in my daily life. >>Above all, reading English articles or books is the most important in my daily life Because all of my book are written in English. >>Because all of my books are written in English. So sometimes I am hard to translate English to Korean. >>So, sometimes it is hard for me to translate English to Korean. And I should take more times to understand. >>And I need more time to understand. So reading is the most important now. >>CORRECT^^ But after getting a job, I will place the emphasis on speaking. >>CORRECT^^ Because I\'d like to work international if I can and speaking is the funnest thing. >>Because I\'d like to work internationally if I can and speaking is the funnest thing.Whatever I practice, in order to work in my field English is very important in my daily life. >>Whatever I practice, in order to work in my field, English is very important in my daily lfe.

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