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Happy new year Juliet!. I hope you will have such a great time with your family. Today I hope you to correct my TOEFL essay please~ Here is a homework. 1.I was surprised when I went to the market because all things are on sale. 2.My mom is always busy with household chores. 3.When I meet someone who needs my help, I will give him/ her a hand. 4.I become lazy whenever weekend is coming. 5.Andrew meets a client who hardly speaks English. This is my TOEFL essay. The article said that the main reason of the cancer is genetic factor. However, the lecturer said that it is not true. She argue that there are some evident that the real reason of the cancer is not heredity. First, she claim that, the reason why Japanese people have high percent of chance of cancer is their diet. Since they eat a lot of salty food, it cause the cancer. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that there are few groups that argue that cancer is hereditary particularly well. second, she disputes that the reason why native american have the lowest rates of contracting any form of cancer is not heredity but their diet. They eat a specific root that has chemical which attack cancer in the body. This refutes the reading passage's claim that the heredity causes the discrepancy in cancer rates among different nationalities.

Hello there! Happy new year too! I had read your homework and I appreciated your effort in answering it. I tried my best to correct your sentences. Hopefully, I helped... I will see you again in our next class. Enjoy your holiday!!! ~T. Juliet^^   Happy new year Juliet!. >> Happy new year Juliet! I hope you will have such a great time with your family. >> I hope you will have a great time together with your family. Today I hope you to correct my TOEFL essay please~ >>Today, I hope for you to correct my TOEFL essay, please.Here is a homework.>>Here is my homework.1.I was surprised when I went to the market because all things are on sale.>>CORRECT 2.My mom is always busy with household chores. >>CORRECT3.When I meet someone who needs my help, I will give him/ her a hand. >>CORRECT4.I become lazy whenever weekend is coming. >>CORRECT5.Andrew meets a client who hardly speaks English.>>CORRECTThis is my TOEFL essay.>>CORRECTThe article said that the main reason of the cancer is genetic factor. >>The article said that the main reason of cancer is a genetic factor. However, the lecturer said that it is not true. >>CORRECT She argue that there are some evident that the real reason of the cancer is not heredity.>>She argues that there are some evidences that cancer is not hereditary.First, she claim that, the reason why Japanese people have high percent of chance of cancer is their diet. >>First, she claims that the reason why Japanese people have high chance of having cancer is their diet. Since they eat a lot of salty food, it cause the cancer. >>They eat a lot of salty food that causes cancer. This casts doubt on the reading passage\'s claim that there are few groups that argue that cancer is hereditary particularly well. >>This casts doubt on the reading passage\'s claim that there are few groups that argue that cancer is particularly hereditary.second, she disputes that the reason why native american have the lowest rates of contracting any form of cancer is not heredity but their diet. >>Secondly, she disputes that native americans have the lowest rates of contracting any form of cancer is not hereditary but because of their diet. They eat a specific root that has chemical which attack cancer in the body. >>They eat a specific root that has chemical which attacks cancer cells in the body. This refutes the reading passage\'s claim that the heredity causes the discrepancy in cancer rates among different nationalities. >>This refutes the reading passage\'s claim that hereditary causes the discrepancy in cancer rates among different nationalities.