Hello Juliet!
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy 2014! I hope that you had a great time together with your family. I'm lucky to meet a activate teacher like you. I believe that my English skill will more flourish at the end of vacation. Let's make a great time together! Have a nice day and enjoy your lunch~
Here is my homework.
1. After I go to the family gathering, we watched a movie.
2. They are not enough old to work. (correct? or They are not old enough to work?)
3. I am angry.
4. I ate cake, ice cream and pudding.
5. My parents don't come to my school was good.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
Happy new year, too^^
I made some corrections. If you have some questions, just ask me in our class.
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Juliet
Happy 2014!
>>CORRECT^^
I hope that you had a great time together with your family.
>>CORRECT^^
>>OR: I hope that you had a great time with your family.
I\'m lucky to meet a activate teacher like you.
>>I\'m lucky to meet an active teacher like you.
I believe that my English skill will more flourish at the end of vacation.
>>I believe that my English skill will be more fluent by the end of vacation.
Let\'s make a great time together!
>>CORRECT^^
Have a nice day and enjoy your lunch~>>CORRECT^^Here is my homework.>>CORRECT^^1. After I go to the family gathering, we watched a movie.
>>After I went to the family gathering, we watched a movie.
>>After going to the family gathering. we watched a movie.2. They are not enough old to work. (correct? or They are not old enough to work?)
>>They are not old enough to work.^^3. I am angry.
>>CORRECT^^4. I ate cake, ice cream and pudding.
>>CORRECT^^5. My parents don\'t come to my school was good.
>>It was good that my parents didn\'t go to my school
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