Hello Juliet!

2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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Happy 2014! I hope that you had a great time together with your family. I'm lucky to meet a activate teacher like you. I believe that my English skill will more flourish at the end of vacation. Let's make a great time together! Have a nice day and enjoy your lunch~ Here is my homework. 1. After I go to the family gathering, we watched a movie. 2. They are not enough old to work. (correct? or They are not old enough to work?) 3. I am angry. 4. I ate cake, ice cream and pudding. 5. My parents don't come to my school was good.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Happy new year, too^^ I made some corrections. If you have some questions, just ask me in our class. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Juliet Happy 2014! >>CORRECT^^ I hope that you had a great time together with your family. >>CORRECT^^ >>OR: I hope that you had a great time with your family. I\'m lucky to meet a activate teacher like you. >>I\'m lucky to meet an active teacher like you. I believe that my English skill will more flourish at the end of vacation. >>I believe that my English skill will be more fluent by the end of vacation. Let\'s make a great time together! >>CORRECT^^ Have a nice day and enjoy your lunch~>>CORRECT^^Here is my homework.>>CORRECT^^1. After I go to the family gathering, we watched a movie. >>After I went to the family gathering, we watched a movie. >>After going to the family gathering. we watched a movie.2. They are not enough old to work. (correct? or They are not old enough to work?) >>They are not old enough to work.^^3. I am angry. >>CORRECT^^4. I ate cake, ice cream and pudding. >>CORRECT^^5. My parents don\'t come to my school was good. >>It was good that my parents didn\'t go to my school

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