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Hello Juliet~ It is already end of the weekend. I think, time pass so fast. Thank you for giving me some lessons every day. I'll keep in mind. I hope you to have a nice weekend too! Today I include some TOEFL essay. Since it doesn't have enough blank, I can't post all of my essay ㅠㅠ. Anyway have a nice weekend! Here is my homework. 1. I can't express. 2. I went Philippine_. 3. Someone hates eating pig. 4. People are getting weak. 5. Nowadays, some of Koreans like eating dog meat. Here is my TOEFL essay. In the past, normally mothers, sometimes fathers, stay at home and take care of their children. Mothers try to lead their children to right way and have considerable interest about their children's education. But, as time passed, ration of women workers is increasing. For simple example, there are few friends around me who want to stay at home and take good care of their children. I believe that after ten years, almost of women leave their child to nursery because of their work. Alike father, mothers don't have enough time spending time for children. I think, parents sincerely love their children and I believe that love is the most important source to become the best teacher. However, it is insufficient, children need affection from their parents. I know, a lots of parents are hard to make some times and exhausted. But for their children, I hope that parents try to spend a little more time for their children.

Hello there!   A happy Friday to you! I appreciate all the effort in doing your homework. Thank you for that. Anyway, I read your homework and your essay as well and corrected some of your errors. So, have time to read it again. I will try to answer your questions if you have in our class Enjoy your weekend! Goodbye!! Teacher Juliet....   Hello Juliet~ >> Correct It is already end of the weekend. >> It is already end of the week. I think, time pass so fast.>> I think time flies so fast. Thank you for giving me some lessons every day. >> Correct I\'ll keep in mind. >> I\'ll keep it all in my mind. I hope you to have a nice weekend too!>> I hope you too will have a nice weekend! OR YOU CAN SAY:>> Have a nice weekend too!Today I include some TOEFL essay. >> Correct ( Today, I include some TOEFL essay. ) Since it doesn\'t have enough blank, I can\'t post all of my essay ㅠㅠ. >> Correct Anyway have a nice weekend!>> Correct ( Anyway, have a nice weekend! )Here is my homework. >> Correct1. I can\'t express. >> I can\'t express it.2. I went Philippine_. >> I went to the Philippines.3. Someone hates eating pig. >> Someone hates eating pork.4. People are getting weak. >> Correct5. Nowadays, some of Koreans like eating dog meat. >> CorrectHere is my TOEFL essay.>> CorrectIn the past, normally mothers, sometimes fathers, stay at home and take care of their children. >> In the past, normally mothers or sometimes fathers used to stay at home to take care of their children. Mothers try to lead their children to right way and have considerable interest about their children\'s education. >> Mothers tried to lead their children in the right way and showed interest about their children\'s education. But, as time passed, ration of women workers is increasing. >> But, as time passed by, the ratio of women working is increasing.  For simple example, there are few friends around me who want to stay at home and take good care of their children. >> A simple example, there are a few friends of mine who want to stay at home and take good care of their children. I believe that after ten years, almost of women leave their child to nursery because of their work. >> I believe that after ten years, almost all women will leave their children to a nursery because of their work. Alike father, mothers don\'t have enough time spending time for children. >> Like fathers, mothers don\'t have enough time to spend for their children.I think, parents sincerely love their children and I believe that love is the most important source to become the best teacher. >> Correct However, it is insufficient, children need affection from their parents. >> However, it is insufficient because children still need affection from their parents. I know, a lots of parents are hard to make some times and exhausted. >> I know a lot of parents who have a hard time and sometimes feel exhausted from their work. But for their children, I hope that parents try to spend a little more time for their children. >> But for the sake of their children, I hope these parents will try to spend more time with their children.