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Good afternoon~ Thank you for sending me nice sentence. Especially, I think today your sentence come into my favor. I will must remember your sentence every time I struggle with some problems. Have a nice day~ Here is my homework. 1. Everybody has plans for the holiday. 2. I will give them many opportunities. 3. I understand how important this training is. 4. I am aware of its disadvantages. 5. I have a lot of experiences. Here is my TOEFL essay. The speaker discuss 'Green revolution' and argues that the figure of researched is not correct and there are still lots of problem about shortage of food. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that the "Green Revolution" describes successful agricultural experiments in various countries. First, he contends that the decreasing figure of global hunger rate is not correct. He said that this figure include the number of Chinese people. The Chinese people are out side of "Green revolution". If we count the number of global hunger excluding Chinese, the figure have been increasing now. This cast doubt on the reading passage's claim that the effectiveness of these improvements global hunger rates, in percentage terms, have dropped since the beginning of the Green Revolution. Second, he disputes that the real problem of food shortage of India is not insufficient but distribution. When he research about India, India are lacking in food production. The real problem is that distribution is not processing well. This is why there are s

Hi there!!!!   A Happy Tuesday to you! You just get a perfect score!!! Great job!!! I know you can do it. I\'m very happy for you.. Anyway, I also read your essay and I tried to correct some of your errors. I really appreciate you for taking the time and effort in doing it. You are improving everyday. I can\'t wait to hear from you again.... See you in class! ~T. Juliet^^   Good afternoon~ >> Correct Thank you for sending me nice sentence. >> Thank you for sending me a nice sentence. OR YOU CAN SAY:>> Thank you for sending me a nice quote. Especially, I think today your sentence come into my favor. >> Especially, I think I\'m in favor with your sentence today. OR YOU CAN SAY:>> Especially, I think I\'m in favor with your quote today. I will must remember your sentence every time I struggle with some problems. >> I must remember this quote every time I struggle. Have a nice day~>> CorrectHere is my homework.1. Everybody has plans for the holiday. >> Correct2. I will give them many opportunities. >> Correct3. I understand how important this training is. >> Correct4. I am aware of its disadvantages. >> Correct5. I have a lot of experiences.>> CorrectHere is my TOEFL essay. >> CorrectThe speaker discuss \'Green revolution\' and argues that the figure of researched is not correct and there are still lots of problem about shortage of food. >> The speaker discusses  the \" Green Revolution \" and argues that the panel of researchers are not correct and that there are still lots of problems about the food shortage. This contradicts the reading passage\'s claim that the \"Green Revolution\" describes successful agricultural experiments in various countries. >>This contradicts the reading passage which claims that the \" Green Revolution \" describes a successful agricultural experiments in other various countries.First, he contends that the decreasing figure of global hunger rate is not correct. >> Correct He said that this figure include the number of Chinese people. >> He said that this figure includes the number of Chinese people. The Chinese people are out side of \"Green revolution\". >> The Chinese people are not part of the \" Green Revolution \". If we count the number of global hunger excluding Chinese, the figure have been increasing now. >> If we count the number of global hunger excluding Chinese, the figure should have been increasing now. This cast doubt on the reading passage\'s claim that the effectiveness of these improvements global hunger rates, in percentage terms, have dropped since the beginning of the Green Revolution. >> This casts doubt on the reading passage which claims that the effectiveness of these improvements against global hunger rates, in terms of percentage has dropped since the beginning of the \" Green Revolution \".Second, he disputes that the real problem of food shortage of India is not insufficient but distribution. >>Second, he disputes that the real problem of food shortage in India is not about insufficiency but because of the unequal distribution of goods. When he research about India, India are lacking in food production. >> When he does a research about India, it shows that the country is lacking some food productions. The real problem is that distribution is not processing well. >> Correct This is why there are s >>This is why there are s...(please continue your essay^^)