Hello Juliet!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon! It was a wonderful class with you today. Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you I can realize that I have been developing my English skill. Of course making a mistake makes me be afraid. But according to your quote, I try to do no again. Anyway it was a nice class. Have a nice day~
Here is my homework.
1.When he acted, everybody was watching.
2.He is a drunken man.
3.That is one of the problems of me.
4.when I came back to home, I saw him.
5.He is relatively in young age.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a good job today. However, I want you to go over my corrections. Anyway, I also appreciate your eagerness to learn English. Just keep it up and you will go a long way! Take care!
~T.Juliet^^
Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
It was a wonderful class with you today.
>> I had a wonderful class with you today.
Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you I can realize that I have been developing my English skill.
>> Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you, I realized that I have been developing my English skill.
Of course making a mistake makes me be afraid.
>> Of course, making a mistake makes me feel afraid.
But according to your quote, I try to do no again.
>>But according to your quote, I try not to do it again.
OR>>But according to your quote, I should not do it again.^^
Anyway it was a nice class. Have a nice day~>> Correct.Here is my homework.1.When he acted, everybody was watching.
>> Coorect
OR>> When he acts, everybody watches.
2. He is a drunken man.
>> Correct
OR>> He is a drunk man.3. That is one of the problems of me.
>> That is one of my problems.4. when I came back to home, I saw him.
>> Correct ( obsever capitalization, though)
OR>> As I came back home, I saw him.5. He is relatively in young age.
>> Correct
OR>> He is relatively at a young age.
>> He is relatively young.
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