Hello Juliet!

2014-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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Good afternoon! It was a wonderful class with you today. Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you I can realize that I have been developing my English skill. Of course making a mistake makes me be afraid. But according to your quote, I try to do no again. Anyway it was a nice class. Have a nice day~ Here is my homework. 1.When he acted, everybody was watching. 2.He is a drunken man. 3.That is one of the problems of me. 4.when I came back to home, I saw him. 5.He is relatively in young age.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a good job today. However, I want you to go over my corrections. Anyway, I also appreciate your eagerness to learn English. Just keep it up and you will go a long way! Take care! ~T.Juliet^^ Good afternoon! >> Correct. It was a wonderful class with you today. >> I had a wonderful class with you today. Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you I can realize that I have been developing my English skill. >> Everyday, by practicing speaking English with you, I realized that I have been developing my English skill. Of course making a mistake makes me be afraid. >> Of course, making a mistake makes me feel afraid. But according to your quote, I try to do no again. >>But according to your quote, I try not to do it again. OR>>But according to your quote, I should not do it again.^^ Anyway it was a nice class. Have a nice day~>> Correct.Here is my homework.1.When he acted, everybody was watching. >> Coorect OR>> When he acts, everybody watches. 2. He is a drunken man. >> Correct OR>> He is a drunk man.3. That is one of the problems of me. >> That is one of my problems.4. when I came back to home, I saw him. >> Correct ( obsever capitalization, though) OR>> As I came back home, I saw him.5. He is relatively in young age. >> Correct OR>> He is relatively at a young age. >> He is relatively young.

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