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Hi there~ Good afternoon. Thank you for commending me. You always make me have confidence thank you! I agree with your quote. Normally I step back and do self-reflection on every Sunday at church. It is helpful to start next week afresh. Anyway I hope you have a nice weekend~ See you on Monday! Here is my essay. I'm sorry. I changed question a little 'Which one do you prefer? Living in the city? or living in the country?' than I can wrote this like a TOEFL essay. In my case, I prefer to live in city. Because living in the city have more advantageous than living in the country. There are some following reasons that support my opinion. First, living in the city is more comfortable than living in the country. Because there are many stores, like convenient store, grocery stores, many cafe and so on. If I pay some money, I could buy anything that I want. Even I can order some products from online shop just sitting at home. Of course, people who are living in the country can order products from online shop. But it takes more time than living in the city. Second, I can get a job by living in the city. There are all kinds of jobs in the city from manufacture work to research service also I can use more cutting edge technology. My major is Engineering and Information technology. Therefore, it is better to live in the city.

Hello there! ^^, Thank you very much for sending me your essay to read. It is a very interesting composition. ^^, Your English is getting better and better everyday. Hooray for you!! However, here are some corrections for you to go over. You can ask me again on Monday so we can talk about it. ^^, Enjoy your weekend.  Take care! ^^,   Hi there~ Good afternoon. >>CORRECT OR BETTER >>Hi there. Good afternoon. Thank you for commending me. >>CORRECT You always make me have confidence thank you! >>You always make me feel confident. Thank you!I agree with your quote. >>CORRECT Normally I step back and do self-reflection on every Sunday at church. >>Normally, I step back and do self-reflection every Sunday at church.  It is helpful to start next week afresh. >>CorrectAnyway I hope you have a nice weekend~ See you on Monday!>>CorrectHere is my essay. >>CORRECT. ^^,I\'m sorry. I changed question a little >>I\'m sorry because I changed the question a little. \'Which one do you prefer? Living in the city? or living in the country?\'>>Correct than I can wrote this like a TOEFL essay>>Then, I can write this like a TOEFL essay. In my case, I prefer to live in city. >>CORRECT OR>> In my case, I prefer living in the city. Because living in the city have more advantageous than living in the country. >>Because living in the city is more advantageous than living in the country. OR>>Because living in the city has more advantages than living in the country. There are some following reasons that support my opinion.>>Here are some reasons that support my opinion.First, living in the city is more comfortable than living in the country. >>CORRECT  Because there are many stores, like convenient store, grocery stores, many cafe and so on. >>Correct If I pay some money, I could buy anything that I want. >>CORRECT Even I can order some products from online shop just sitting at home. >>I can even order some products online while sitting at home. Of course, people who are living in the country can order products from online shop. >>Of course, people who are living in the country can order products from online shop, too.  But it takes more time than living in the city.>>CORRECTSecond, I can get a job by living in the city. >>CORRECT There are all kinds of jobs in the city from manufacture work to research service also I can use more cutting edge technology. >>There are all kinds of jobs in the city, from manufacturing to research services. Also, I can use more cutting edge technology. My major is Engineering and Information technology. >>CORRECT Therefore, it is better to live in the city. >>CORRECT.