Hello Juliet!

Good afternoon teacher~ Thank you for commending me again. I am excited too when I have a class with you. Since you continue to correct my error I can emerge right sentence when we are talking. Teacher I will not able to attend class tomorrow because of meeting with my professor. I'm sorry. Then see you on Monday! Here is my essay. I think, there are no big distinction between them. Theses two ideas have same essence don't pursue money too much. If we pursue money too much, we will make a wrong choice in important situation. For example, after police get lots of money, he overlooks some criminal's crime or there are a lot of issues on TV about lobbying. According to these affairs, desiring money can lead us to wrong way. Therefore theses two ideas can be reconciled.

Hi there!   I hope you are doing fine tonight. As always, I enjoyed our class, too, and I had a great time talking with you. :)) I am delighted to know that I am able to help you with your English skills. It makes me proud that you are able to correct yourself in composing your sentences. Continue practicing and studying English even if our class is over. I can also see that you are getting better in speaking English. Even if there are some slips in your grammar and pronunciation we can still polish that and I will be more than happy to help you with that. :))   If you have any questions regarding grammar and pronunciation, feel free to ask me in class. :)) And one more thing, since you haven\'t called the manager for tomorrow\'s class, I still have to follow SOP which means, I still have to call you. I\'m so sorry about this. However, the good thing is, you can choose not to answer my call. This is absolutely fine.^^  Have a great night and I hope you have a good night\'s rest. :)) See you in Monday! :)) ~T. Juliet ^^, Good afternoon teacher~ >> Correct! Thank you for commending me again. >> Correct! OR>> Thank you for your commendation. I am excited too when I have a class with you. >> Correct! Since you continue to correct my error I can emerge right sentence when we are talking.>> Since you continue to correct my errors, I can emerge right sentences when we are talking. OR>> Since you continue to give me corrections, I can construct right sentences when we are talking. Teacher I will not able to attend class tomorrow because of meeting with my professor. >> Teacher, I will not be able to attend class tomorrow because of my meeting with my professor. OR>> Teacher, I will not be able to attend class tomorrow because I have a meeting with my professor. I\'m sorry. >> Correct! >> OR: I apologize for that. Then see you on Monday! >> I will see you then on Monday.Here is my essay.>> Correct!I think, there are no big distinction between them. >> I think there is no distinction between them. OR>>I think there are no big distinctions between them. Theses two ideas have same essence don\'t pursue money too much. >> These two ideas have the same essence which is not to pursue money too much. (The word \'these\' is already in the plural form. It is the plural form of the word \'this\'.) If we pursue money too much, we will make a wrong choice in important situation. >> Correct!OR>> If we pursue money too much, we will be making a wrong choice in an important situation. For example, after police get lots of money, he overlooks some criminal\'s crime or there are a lot of issues on TV about lobbying. >> For example, after the police gets lots of money, he overlooks some crimes or there will be issues that will be shown on TV about lobbying. According to these affairs, desiring money can lead us to wrong way. >> According to these affairs, desiring money can lead us to the wrong way. Therefore theses two ideas can be reconciled. >> Therefore, these two ideas can be reconciled.