Hello Juliet!

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing you homework^^

I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.

If you have some questions, just ask me in our class.

Have a great day and take care^^

~T. Juliet^^

Long time no see teacher!

>> CORRECT^^

Nice to meet you again.

>> CORRECT^^

>> OR: Nice to talk to you again.

Normally, I have been aching whole this week.

>> I have been in pain for a whole week recently.

If I still hurt until tomorrow, I would better go hospital.

>> If I still feel any pain tomorrow, I will go to the hospital.

Any way nice to meet you again teacher I hope that I will attend our next class with good condition.

>> Anyway, nice to talk to you again teacher. I hope that I will be able to attend our class in good condition.

And take care not to catch a cold.

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See you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT^^
Here is my sentence.
>> Here are my sentences.
1. After reading a historical textbook I realize that a lot of privileges that we have now come from referendum.

>> 1. After reading a historical textbook, I realized that we have a lot of privileges that we have from the referendum.
2. Since I had been performing my military service when I was 21, I did my first referendum in military camp.

>> 2. When I was 21 years old, I attended the military service and I had my first referendum in the military camp.
(HaHaHa, I really hope you to be satisfied my sentences.)
>> I really hope you are satisfied with my sentences.
Here is my essay.
>> CORRECT^
I think, there are not many unforeseen consequences.

>> I think, there are not so many unforeseen consequences.

Sometimes, there are some embarrassed situation in forces stop driving day like unexpected accident, missing important meeting or some situations people must use car.

>> Sometimes, there are some embarrassing situations in military forces to stop driving in a day like, unexpected accidents, missing important meetings or some situations where in people need to use cars.

But not only those kinds of situation barely emerge but also we just use our car even if we pay some penalty.

>> But not only those kinds of situation barely emerge but we also use our cars even though we need to pay some penalty.

On the other hands, there are big pros by implementing this system.

>> On the other hand, there are some big pros to implement the system.

Therefore I\'m in favor of forced stop driving day.

>> Therefore, I\'m in favor of forced stop-driving in a day.