Hello Juliet!

2014-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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I'm sorry for being absent class. Yesterday, my enrollment restarted. So extremely lots of students try to enroll the class again. It was too competitive and in order to enroll the class that I want to take, I was so busy yesterday. I called to department, visited the professor to ask him to open more class, waited for another allowance time and so on. Anyway I'm sorry for absent my class again. I think I missed too many class last week. I will try to do my best for our left classes.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday!

Thank you so much for sending me this letter of yours, Shawn. I was once a student, so don\'t worry about it. I totally understand your situation. Well, good luck on your studies and I hope you\'ll be as good as you are in our class. See you later.^^

~T. Juliet^^


I\'m sorry for being absent class.

>>I\'m sorry for being absent in our class.

Yesterday, my enrollment restarted.

>>Correct

So extremely lots of students try to enroll the class again.

>>Correct

It was too competitive and in order to enroll the class that I want to take, I was so busy yesterday.

>>Correct

I called to department, visited the professor to ask him to open more class, waited for another allowance time and so on.

>>I called to department, visited the professor to ask him to open more classes, waited for another (what do you mean by \"allowance time\"?)

Anyway I\'m sorry for absent my class again.

>>Anyway, I\'m sorry for being absent in class again.

I think I missed too many class last week.

>>I think I misses several classes last week.

I will try to do my best for our left classes.

>>Correct

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