Hello Juliet!

Hi there^^

Yes, it is Monday again^^

I know that we will have a great time together^^

Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.

If you have any question, just feel free to ask me in our class.

See you tomorrow.

Have a great day and take care^^

~T.Juliet

It is nice Monday again!

>> It\'s a nice Monday again! :)

Only three days after we will get long holiday!

>> We only have three more days left before the holiday.

 I\'m really happy just imagine.

>> I\'m really happy imagining that.

After holiday I will start to prepare my TOFEL test.

>> After the holiday, I will start preparing for my TOFEL.

So until that day I would like to enjoy my last holiday.

>> CORRECT^^

 Anyway our class only left two days.

>> Anyway, we only have two more classes left.

 I think time flies so fast.

>> CORRECT^^

I hope that we have great two times.

>> I hope that we will have a great time in our remaining days together.

Have a nice day and see you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT^^
Here is my essay.
>> CORRECT^^
(Do I have to write when it comes to agreement?)
I think high tax for tobacco is good.

>> CORRECT^^

If this policy is implemented than more people try to cut somking and the ratio of cancer will decrease definitely.

>> If they\'re going to implement this policy, many people will quit smoking and the number of people having cancer will definitely decrease.

There are also cigarette butt decreasing.

>> Also, cigarette butt will decrease.

But when it comes to alcohol, it is not good for our country.

>> CORRECT^^

In our country, alcohol culture had been advanced a lot.

>> Do you mean, \"In our country, the culture of drinking alcohol has increase.\"

So there are extremely lots of restaurant for alcohol.

>> So there are extremely lots of restaurants who sells alcohol.

If government try to increase tax for alcohol, it is burden for people buying alcohol outside.

>> If government try to increase the tax in alcohol, it will be a burden for people buying alcohol outside.

They just try to have it at home.

>> They will just drink at home.

As a result many restaurant will suffer economic crisis and have really big complaint to government.

>> As a result many restaurants will suffer from economic crisis and they will complain to the government.

The protest may happen. 

>> A protest might happen.
 For me, it is also burden.

>> For me, it also a burden

I really enjoy drinking beer with my friends.

>> CORRECT^^

It help relieving my one week\'s stress and I can be close with new friends easily.

>> It helps me relieve my stress and I can have a new friends easily.

And I think the cost of alcohol still expensive.

>> And I think the cost of alcohols are still expensive.

For these reasons I disagree with this policy.

>> CORRECT^^