Hello kaith^^

2010-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

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Hello. I'm kim I'm first writting at now. haha ^^ How are you today.? I'm so busy because of I met a lot of the patient. moreover the whether

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Hello Kim,   It's nice to see you write on our website. It makes my day bright and I would love to see more of your writings in the future. As I told you before, don't be shy. You can write here every day and I'll check it every day too. It will make your English skills better. We don't have much time over the phone during our class so you can tell me so many things in here.   I'm looking forward to your letters ^^ kkkk, take care!   Sincerely yours,Kaycee     Hello. I'm kim>>Hello, I'm Kim.>>Hello, my name is Kim.I'm first writting at now. haha ^^>>It's my first time to write in here.How are you today.?>>How are you today?I'm so busy because of I met a lot of the patient.>>I was so busy today because I met lots of patients.moreover the whether >>The weather is fine today!

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