Hello Kate!

2012-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Please make a compositon on: "Which bad habit do you think would be the most difficult to get rid of? Why? I think that it would be the most difficult to get rid of bitting my nails. When I was young, I had started to bite my nails. So I'm difficult to get rid of this bad habit. When I was nervous, I often bite my nails myself. Because my nails is not good visiable, I think that it is the bad habit. In addition, I often play the computer game. When I play the computer game, I can't remind that the time is go over quickly. Considering my bad habit, I think that I have a lot of bad habit. I hate my bad habit.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Louis!Thank you so much for answering your homework. Anyways, I complement you for always inserting extra effort in your lessons. Keep up the good work! You made a very comprehensive answer to your homework. I placed the corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Just let me know if you have any questions? Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and have a wonderful afternoon! ~Teacher Kate^^ Please make a compositon on: \"Which bad habit do you think would be the most difficult to get rid of? Why? I think that it would be the most difficult to get rid of bitting my nails. >> I think that  the most difficult habbit to get rid of is bitting my nails.When I was young, I had started to bite my nails. >> Correct >> OR I had started bitting my nails, when I was young.So I\'m difficult to get rid of this bad habit.>> So I had difficulty getting rid of this bad habit.When I was nervous, I often bite my nails myself.>> Everytime I got nervous, I often bite my nails voluntarily.Because my nails is not good visiable, I think that it is the bad habit.>> Since my nails are not good to bite, I think that it is a bad habit.In addition, I often play the computer game.>> CorrectWhen I play the computer game, I can\'t remind that the time is go over quickly.>> Whenever  I play a computer game, I can\'t be reminded that the time goes over quickly.Considering my bad habit, I think that I have a lot of bad habit.>> Considering my bad habit, I think that I have a lot to change.I hate my bad habit. >> I hate my bad habits.

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