Hello Kate

2012-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm [이름]. I'm in Shanhai for business trip. So I can't attend today's class, I will be in airplane in our time.. sorry for frequent absence and appreciate for your devotion. I hope to meet again . Bye! Good luck!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Wow! Thank you so much for letting me know about your schedule. I hope you\'ll have a safe trip back home. I Definitely would love to hear from you very soon. Catch you later. ~T. Kate^^ Here are my corrections for you: I\'m [이름]. >> CorrectI\'m in Shanhai for business trip. >> CorrectSo I can\'t attend today\'s class, I will be in airplane in our time. >> So I can\'t attend today\'s class because I will be in the airplane in our time.sorry for frequent absence and appreciate for your devotion. >> Sorry for my frequent absences and I appreciate your devotion. I hope to meet again . Bye! Good luck! >> Correct

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