Hello Kathrine!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!
I am really happy that I was given the chance to talk with you.
You are very accommodating and a kind, diligent student, indeed.
I also hope that Teacher Tina is feeling fine now so she can take the class with you tomorrow.
Also, I hope I was of help to you today.
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Take care!
_T.Kathrine^^
Nice to meet you Kathrine!
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Thank you for giving a good lecture for me.
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I\'m wondering that Is Tina okay?
>>I\'m wondering how\'s Tina doing.
I hope that she would be fine as fast as she can.
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Anyway as the same I do it in homework section, I want you to revise my sentence.
>>Anyway, as I always do, I want you to revise my sentences.
\'Art organization is very useful to improve people\'s sensibility and it is educational for students.
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However if art organization raised their admission fee to keep their facilities, there would be no one who want to visit there.
>>However, if an art organization will raise the admission fee to some exhibits to keep their facilities, not many people would want to attend to it.
So inorder to encourage people can enjoy art organizations without burden, the government should financially support art organizations.
>>So, in order to encourage more people to enjoy art without any burden, the government should financially support art organizations.
And it would also attract many tourist.
>>This may also attract many tourists.
Have a nice day!
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Here is my homework.
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