Hello Kathrine

Hello teacher~. It is a nice morning. what's up about Glenda? is she sick? Anyway nice to meet you! I had a nice time with you too. Thank you for cheering up my TOEFL test. I hope that I will be able to get a satisfied score like you mentioned. Anyway have a nice day! Here is my homework. If I could change one thing in our country, I'd like to change one region to like a Silicon valley. You know Silicon valley is the worldest facmous region for technology. Many famous ceo come from there like Steve jobs, Mark zukerburg and so on. Since our country don't have a region that have a nice circumstance liks Silicon valley. So if I could, I would like to change one region to like a Silicon valley then give a lot of chance of success in state of the art of field to many people.

Hello James!

Again, it was very nice to meet you. 

You really talk very well and your ideas are so comprehensive. 

So good job.

With regards to your composition, I would like to commend you for doing a great one.

You did not only explained your side but you also added some informations.

But, you should expounded more for you to explain better your side.

And, I wish you luck in your up-coming exam in TOEFL.

I know that you will do good because you are a diligent student.

Be confident! Fighting!

Again, I had fun talking to you.

I hope that T. Glenda will be able to talk to you tomorrow.

Have a great day ahead! ^^

Always,

T. Kathrine

 Hello teacher~. 

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It is a nice morning.

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what\'s up about Glenda?

>> What happen to Glenda?

 is she sick?

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Anyway nice to meet you!

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I had a nice time with you too.

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Thank you for cheering up my TOEFL test.

>> Thank you for cheering me up with regards to my TOEFL test.

 I hope that I will be able to get a satisfied score like you mentioned.

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>> OR: I hope that I will be able to get a satisfactory score like you mentioned.

Anyway have a nice day!
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Here is my homework.
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If I could change one thing in our country, I\'d like to change one region to like a Silicon valley.

>> If I could change on thing in my country, I\'d like to change a region Silicon Valley.

You know Silicon valley is the worldest facmous region for technology.

>> You know, Silicon Valey is the world\'s famous   region for technology.

Many famous ceo come from there like Steve jobs, Mark zukerburg and so on.

>> Many famous CEO\'s are from that place just like Steve Jobs, Mark Zukerberg and so on.

Since our country don\'t have a region that have a nice circumstance liks Silicon valley.

>> But our country doesn\'t have a region that has a nice circumstance like the Silicon Valley. 

So if I could, I would like to change one region to like a Silicon valley then give a lot of chance of success in state of the art of field to many people.

>> So if I could, I would like to change one region like the Silicon Valley which can give a lot of chances to be successful on the state of the art in many fields to many people.