Hello~ Lainey! :)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Well, thank you :)) I had fun talking to you too :) Just like what I said as long as we work together then we will achieve your goals :)
Sure! I will definitely give you writing composition and this will be based on the previous writing compositions that was used during the past IELTS exam :)
I\'m glad you had fun with your family :)))
Talk to you in class...\\m/...
T. Lainey <\",)))><
It\'s really nice to know you.
>>> correct
I\'m happy to study with you and have a good feeling about our future!
>>> I\'m happy to study with you and I have a good feeling about our future.
Your pronunciation, accuracy and speed..everything was perfect.
>>> Your pronunciation, accuracy and speed was perfect.
I wish my interviewer would be nice as you.
>>> I wish my interviewer would be as nice as you.
But 20 minuits are little bit short to have enough conversation.
>>> But 20 minutes is very short to have enough conversation.
I\'m also thinking about to extend our study time.
>>> I am thinking of extending our study time.
After my decision I will tell you directly and take contact with our manager.
>>> Once I\'ve decided, I will tell you and get in touch with your manager.
And I hope you could give me some writing homework.
>>> I hope you could give me some writing homework.
Today I\'m just writing some ordinary things.
>>> correct
But if I have specific Thema, then it would be more helpful to improve my Englisch.
>>> But if I have a specific topic to write about then it will improve my writing skills.
It sounds weird, but Englisch conversation is good for my mental health.
>>> It sounds weird but conversing in English is very good for my mental health.
Because while our talking, I forget my problems in my life, to concentrate on our conversation.
>>> Because while we are talking, I tend to forget about my problems and just concentrate on our conversation.
Today I visited a Halal food restaurant and saw a movie with my parents.
>>> correct
The restaurant was founded by Yemen refugees and Koreans. It was a nice collaboration.
>>> correct
The movie has a heroine who struggles to save her sister.
>>> The movie was about someone addicted to heroine who struggles to save her sister.
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