Hello~ Lainey! :)

2019-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

It\'s really nice to know you. I\'m happy to study with you and have a good feeling about our future! Your pronunciation, accuracy and speed..everything was perfect. I wish my interviewer would be nice as you. But 20 minuits are little bit short to have enough conversation. I\'m also thinking about to extend our study time. After my decision I will tell you directly and take contact with our manager. And I hope you could give me some writing homework. Today I\'m just writing some ordinary things. But if I have specific Thema, then it would be more helpful to improve my Englisch. It sounds weird, but Englisch conversation is good for my mental health. Because while our talking, I forget my problems in my life, to concentrate on our conversation. Today I visited a Halal food restaurant and saw a movie with my parents. The restaurant was founded by Yemen refugees and Koreans. It was a nice collaboration. The movie has a heroine who struggles to save her sister. Genre is noir. Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Well, thank you :)) I had fun talking to you too :) Just like what I said as long as we work together then we will achieve your goals :)

Sure! I will definitely give you writing composition and this will be based on the previous writing compositions that was used during the past IELTS exam :)

I\'m glad you had fun with your family :)))

Talk to you in class...\\m/...


T. Lainey <\",)))><



It\'s really nice to know you.

>>> correct


I\'m happy to study with you and have a good feeling about our future!

>>> I\'m happy to study with you and I have a good feeling about our future.


Your pronunciation, accuracy and speed..everything was perfect.

>>> Your pronunciation, accuracy and speed was perfect.


I wish my interviewer would be nice as you.

>>> I wish my interviewer would be as nice as you.


But 20 minuits are little bit short to have enough conversation.

>>> But 20 minutes is very short to have enough conversation.


 I\'m also thinking about to extend our study time.

>>> I am thinking of extending our study time.


After my decision I will tell you directly and take contact with our manager.

>>> Once I\'ve decided, I will tell you and get in touch with your manager.


And I hope you could give me some writing homework.

>>> I hope you could give me some writing homework.


Today I\'m just writing some ordinary things.

>>> correct


But if I have specific Thema, then it would be more helpful to improve my Englisch.

>>> But if I have a specific topic to write about then it will improve my writing skills.


It sounds weird, but Englisch conversation is good for my mental health.

>>> It sounds weird but conversing in English is very good for my mental health.


Because while our talking, I forget my problems in my life, to concentrate on our conversation.

>>> Because while we are talking, I tend to forget about my problems and just concentrate on our conversation.


Today I visited a Halal food restaurant and saw a movie with my parents.

>>> correct


The restaurant was founded by Yemen refugees and Koreans. It was a nice collaboration.

>>> correct


The movie has a heroine who struggles to save her sister.

>>> The movie was about someone addicted to heroine who struggles to save her sister.

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