Hello Lainey~!

2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Hello~ How are you? I did your homework. The question number 1\'s answer is A, 2 is D, 3 is B, 4 is A, 5 is B. But you forgot to give me the writing assignment. Please don\'t forget it next time. :) So today, I\'m just writing my journal. Before few days ago, I decided to get a driver\'s license. Since yesterday, I had learned the theory and traffic rules. Tomorrow I\'m going to take the written test. I guess it would be not complicated, but I\'m little bit nervous. I will try hard. Please wish me good luck. After passing the test, I\'m going to be allowed to apply performance test. I can\'t wait to drive a car by myself. I always have took the somebody\'s car. In this Monday, I can\'t take your class, because I\'m going to meet my friends at that time. I feel sorry about this, but the appointment was planned long time ago. So I want to take my class at morning. You can\'t participate in our class at that time, is that right? See you on this Tuesday. Or hear you on this Tuesday!

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


I\'m doing good. Thank you for asking. Yes. good job all your answer is correct.

But I suggest next time you copy and past the composition together with your answers okay? :)

I didn\'t forget your composition I just want you to get a hang of how I give homework but don\'t worry your next homework will be a writing composition :)

I will fix a couple of your sentences because some words are misplaced and some are grammatically wrong.

Overall, you are on the right track...\\m/...


T. Lainey <\",)))><


So today, I\'m just writing my journal.

>>> correct


Before few days ago, I decided to get a driver\'s license.

>>> A few days ago, I decided to get a driver\'s license.


Since yesterday, I had learned the theory and traffic rules.

>>> Since yesterday, I learned about the theory and traffic rules.


Tomorrow I\'m going to take the written test.

>>> correct


I guess it would be not complicated, but I\'m little bit nervous.

>>> I hope it wouldn\'t be complicated, I am a little bit nervous though.


I will try hard.

>>> correct


Please wish me good luck.

>>> correct


After passing the test, I\'m going to be allowed to apply performance test.

>>> After passing the test, I\'m going to be allowed to apply the performance test.


I can\'t wait to drive a car by myself.

>>> correct


I always have took the somebody\'s car.

>>> I always have to take somebody\'s car.


In this Monday, I can\'t take your class, because I\'m going to meet my friends at that time.

>>> On Monday, I will not be able to take your class because I\'m going to meet my friends.


 I feel sorry about this, but the appointment was planned long time ago.

>>> correct


So I want to take my class at morning.

>>> So, I want to take my class in the morning.


You can\'t participate in our class at that time, is that right?

>>> correct


See you on this Tuesday. Or hear you on this Tuesday!

>>> See you this Tuesday or hear you this Tuesday.








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