Hello liam

2010-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

hello again , teacher :) My life style is keeping busy but enjoy everytime. When I am happy,tired,sad , do my best everytime. I try to live my life everyday positively on a step by step basis. It allow me to focus on most imfortant aspect in life thanks a lot. see you tomorrow.hahaha

강사 첨삭

Hello there..;0) Thank you so much for the composition and for telling me that life is indeed wonderful..^^ Just enjoy life to the fullest!And always do your best! hello again , teacher :)My life style is keeping busy but enjoy everytime. >>My life is getting busy, but I always enjoy every single time of it.When I am happy,tired,sad , do my best everytime. >>I always try to do my best whenever I feel happy,sad or tiredI try to live my life everyday positively on a step by step basis. >>correct!It allow me to focus on most imfortant aspect in life >>It allows me to focus on most important aspect in lifethanks a lot. see you tomorrow.hahaha >>correct!

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