Hello liam
학생이 쓴 원문
hello again , teacher :)
My life style is keeping busy but enjoy everytime.
When I am happy,tired,sad , do my best everytime.
I try to live my life everyday positively on a step by step basis.
It allow me to focus on most imfortant aspect in life
thanks a lot. see you tomorrow.hahaha
강사 첨삭
Hello there..;0)
Thank you so much for the composition and for telling me that life is indeed wonderful..^^
Just enjoy life to the fullest!And always do your best!
hello again , teacher :)My life style is keeping busy but enjoy everytime.
>>My life is getting busy, but I always enjoy every single time of it.When I am happy,tired,sad , do my best everytime.
>>I always try to do my best whenever I feel happy,sad or tiredI try to live my life everyday positively on a step by step basis.
>>correct!It allow me to focus on most imfortant aspect in life >>It allows me to focus on most important aspect in lifethanks a lot. see you tomorrow.hahaha
>>correct!
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