Hello Lirah,

2010-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 lirah

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It had been so cold yesterday, but today is gotten warmer. This semester, I have an important course, which is named [Global Program, Progress for Sustainable Regeneration Studies of Urban Spaces]. This class could be registered by students of four different departments. All students should speak in English in this class because of an international studio. Of course, half of all are foreign students. One of the hardest works is that we should make a presentation every week. After then, we will go field work to Dujangyan, China from May 23 to June 1. Then, we have to give a final presentation in front of several professors on July 1. As you said, it is a very important thing that I overcome being shy of speaking in English. I need to practice it more hardly.

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Hello Julie,   I appreciate your effort in trying to overcome your shyness in speaking in English. I can see lots of potentials in you and I strongly believe that you can do better. I know that it's not easy to do a presentation in English but you have to do it for your future career. If you will do your best in this English presentation you are actually starting to create a good foundation to your goals in life.   You should speak up because you will be presenting to other foreign students and you will be representing your country. I believe in you and you should believe in your self too! Have a wonderful day!   Sincerely yours,T. Lirah     It had been so cold yesterday, but today is gotten warmer. >>It had been so cold yesterday, but it is warmer today.This semester, I have an important course, which is named [Global Program, Progress for Sustainable Regeneration Studies of Urban Spaces]. >>This semester, I have an important course called "Global Program, Progress for Sustainable Regeneration Studies of Urban Spaces".This class could be registered by students of four different departments. >>This class can be enrolled by students of four different departments.All students should speak in English in this class because of an international studio. Of course, half of all are foreign students.>>All students should speak in English in this class because of an international studio and of course, half of the class are foreign students.One of the hardest works is that we should make a presentation every week. >>One of the hardest work is that we should make a presentation every week. After then, we will go field work to Dujangyan, China from May 23 to June 1. >>After that, we will go to a field work in Dujangyan, China from May 23 to June 1. Then, we have to give a final presentation in front of several professors on July 1.>>Correct. As you said, it is a very important thing that I overcome being shy of speaking in English. >>As you said, it is a very important thing that I overcome being shy in speaking in English. I need to practice it more hardly. >>I need to practice harder.

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